A Daydream Victory Poem by Barry Middleton

A Daydream Victory

Rating: 4.8


the images have never died
I live within a daydream still
I have resisted all advice

I searched to find a messenger
but often I would feel regret
then I relied on metaphor

for life is just a beating heart
a shifting star that moves along
to steal our legacy and pride

I knew a stone can never die
so I became a stolid rock
beneath the whisper of a brook

and I may find a place in time
or rest unnoticed by the breeze
if paradise ignores my pleas

a daydream yet is all too brief
few men outlast the final verse
to stay where waters gently flow

but I have left a fragile clue
along the paths of yesterday
where daydreams live eternally

A Daydream Victory
Tuesday, July 4, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: death,dreams,poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dimitrios Galanis 18 July 2017

so I became a stolid rock beneath the whisper of a brook: Great verses depicting the power of a poet's pen.Wispering brook is your poesy, Barry, dwe to live in eternity as a stolid rock!

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Lamar Cole 04 July 2017

Very thought invoking and deep poem.

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Barry Middleton 04 July 2017

Thanks, glad you found it to be interesting.

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Nosheen Irfan 04 July 2017

A marvel of a poem. Amazing imagery, great depth. You are at your best. A sure 10.

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Barry Middleton 04 July 2017

Thanks as always Nosheen. All poets are dreamers I think. May your dreams be pleasant ones.

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