A Deadly Hit Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

A Deadly Hit

Rating: 4.4


She failed to make it
It did hurt and deadly hit
I knew she will come
I was ready to welcome

It was her desire
She wanted something to acquire
It was not at all expected
She had high regards and respected

I wanted her not to weep
Consoled her all the time to keep
Clam posture with no concern
It can be any body’s turn

I heard her woes and felt sorry
She was passing time with great worry
She had all the way kept thinking
Unfortunately she was out for sinking

What was I expected to do?
Alley the fears and attempt to woo
One should always stand by in crisis
This should be words of promises

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maulin Shah 23 July 2010

She failed to make it It did hurt and deadly hit I knew she will come I was ready to welcome .. so much sure of her arrival on scene....10

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Maulin Shah 20 July 2010

She failed to make it It did hurt and deadly hit really shocking......10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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