A Deal Poem by Patricia Gale

A Deal

Rating: 5.0


Tender strong arms
Holding love so true
Protected from all harm
Looking into the soul through the eyes
She whispers low….
Could you make a deal with your wife?
To love me like there is no tomorrow…
But make it for the rest of our life’s?
Hold in tight in your heart
Wrapped in a golden bow of forever
And never ever let it depart

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Harris 16 December 2007

Patricia, a lovely offer, sadly I'm going to have reject respectively. Great little poem and well crafted. Raised a smile to my face though. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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Thad Wilk 16 December 2007

A very pretty poem Patricia and a pleasure to read, Thanks for sharing! ! *10*! ! ! Thad

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Rachel Butler 06 November 2009

'Holding love so true' Rachel Ann Butler

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Chitra - 19 November 2008

a beautiful write from a true soul

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Thad Wilk 29 December 2007

Beautiful Pat! Sounds like a real good deal! Thanks for sharing this poem! ! ! *10*! ! ! Thad

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Scott Austin 28 December 2007

This is a loving tender piece of work you have written here, what a wonderful thought you had. scott

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Broken Peaces 16 December 2007

Lovely Patricia both warm and sensitive max points fromme absolute pleasure to read Chris

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