A Deep Abiding Love Poem by Audrey Heller

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Audrey Heller

Audrey Heller

Bronx, New York/ Now residing in Florida

A Deep Abiding Love

Rating: 3.0


If I could only be with you, one more
time! It most certainly, would make my
day! I would do things for you, like I used
to do. As if you never, were away! Just
to see your smile and be able, to hear
your laugh, would be a blessing in
disguise! To be able to look up at your
face, with the twinkle, in your eyes! How
I long, for the days, when you were here
and we'd talk, on the phone everyday. I'd
call you in the morning, to see, if you were,
okay. We both, loved to do the morning
puzzle, in the paper and if one of us, got
stuck, we'd call. When given the answer,
we realized, it wasn't that difficult, at all!
We did a lot for each other, because we
had a deep abiding love! I miss these
precious days, we shared and still, hope
it can be felt, from up above!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rachel Butler 05 November 2009

'We realized, it wasn't that difficult, at all! We did a lot for each other, because we had a deep abiding love! I miss these precious days' Rachel Ann Butler

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precious days, we shared and still, hope it can be felt, from up above! ... it is abiding and so demanding... beautiful wwrite and keep it up..... good write

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Marilyn Lott 13 February 2009

Some people are so special to us they leave a terrible void when they are gone. You put this very well Audrey! A '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Eddie Roa 02 February 2009

you've captured very well the pain of nostalgia for days long gone. remarkable piece of writing

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Zaarah Jasmin 26 January 2009

This kinda sooth my soul, i like the way you put the words, very touching indeed! thank you for sharing.

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