Treasure Island

Audrey Heller

(2/28/32 / Bronx, New York/ Now residing in Florida)

A Deep Abiding Love

If I could only be with you, one more
time! It most certainly, would make my
day! I would do things for you, like I used
to do. As if you never, were away! Just
to see your smile and be able, to hear
your laugh, would be a blessing in
disguise! To be able to look up at your
face, with the twinkle, in your eyes! How
I long, for the days, when you were here
and we'd talk, on the phone everyday. I'd
call you in the morning, to see, if you were,
okay. We both, loved to do the morning
puzzle, in the paper and if one of us, got
stuck, we'd call. When given the answer,
we realized, it wasn't that difficult, at all!
We did a lot for each other, because we
had a deep abiding love! I miss these
precious days, we shared and still, hope
it can be felt, from up above!

Submitted: Monday, January 26, 2009
Edited: Monday, February 02, 2009

Do you like this poem?
0 person liked.
0 person did not like.

What do you think this poem is about?

Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Comments about this poem (A Deep Abiding Love by Audrey Heller )

Enter the verification code :

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/12/2009 8:28:00 PM)

    precious days, we shared and still, hope
    it can be felt, from up above! ... it is abiding and so demanding... beautiful wwrite and keep it up..... good write (Report) Reply

  • Marilyn Lott (2/13/2009 9:08:00 PM)

    Some people are so special to us they leave a terrible void when they are gone. You put this very well Audrey! A '10! '

    Warm Wishes,
    Marilyn (Report) Reply

  • Eddie Roa (2/2/2009 7:18:00 PM)

    you've captured very well the pain of nostalgia for days long gone. remarkable piece of writing (Report) Reply

  • Zaarah Jasmin (1/26/2009 6:07:00 PM)

    This kinda sooth my soul, i like the way you put the words, very touching indeed! thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

Read all 5 comments » Updates

New Poems

  1. The Deserted Spring, Bazi alis Subrata Ray
  2. Love In Lovers' Poetry, Bazi alis Subrata Ray
  3. Fun never runs out!, PARTHA SARATHI PAUL
  4. The Passing Winds, Tex T Sarnie
  5. Too Few Words, Tex T Sarnie
  6. Wake up!, Md. Asadullah
  7. viper kiss, aaron jimenez
  8. बहाना/ Bahaanaa, Aftab Alam
  9. a dream, jaquesha webb
  10. I Go Far to Fetch the Truth, with Hope, Aftab Alam

Poem of the Day

poet Sir Walter Raleigh

EVEN such is Time, that takes in trust
Our youth, our joys, our all we have,
And pays us but with earth and dust;
   Who in the dark and silent grave,
...... Read complete »


Member Poem

Trending Poems

  1. 04 Tongues Made Of Glass, Shaun Shane
  2. The Conclusion, Sir Walter Raleigh
  3. Still I Rise, Maya Angelou
  4. If, Rudyard Kipling
  5. Annabel Lee, Edgar Allan Poe
  6. The Road Not Taken, Robert Frost
  7. Dreams, Langston Hughes
  8. All the World's a Stage, William Shakespeare
  9. Daffodils, William Wordsworth
  10. Phenomenal Woman, Maya Angelou

Trending Poets

[Hata Bildir]