Audrey Heller

Rookie - 0 Points (2/28/32 / Bronx, New York/ Now residing in Florida)

A Deep Abiding Love - Poem by Audrey Heller

If I could only be with you, one more
time! It most certainly, would make my
day! I would do things for you, like I used
to do. As if you never, were away! Just
to see your smile and be able, to hear
your laugh, would be a blessing in
disguise! To be able to look up at your
face, with the twinkle, in your eyes! How
I long, for the days, when you were here
and we'd talk, on the phone everyday. I'd
call you in the morning, to see, if you were,
okay. We both, loved to do the morning
puzzle, in the paper and if one of us, got
stuck, we'd call. When given the answer,
we realized, it wasn't that difficult, at all!
We did a lot for each other, because we
had a deep abiding love! I miss these
precious days, we shared and still, hope
it can be felt, from up above!


Comments about A Deep Abiding Love by Audrey Heller

  • Freshman - 935 Points Rachel Ann Butler (11/5/2009 5:15:00 PM)

    'We realized, it wasn't that difficult, at all!
    We did a lot for each other, because we
    had a deep abiding love! I miss these
    precious days'

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  • Gold Star - 55,073 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/12/2009 8:28:00 PM)

    precious days, we shared and still, hope
    it can be felt, from up above! ... it is abiding and so demanding... beautiful wwrite and keep it up..... good write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 467 Points Marilyn Lott (2/13/2009 9:08:00 PM)

    Some people are so special to us they leave a terrible void when they are gone. You put this very well Audrey! A '10! '

    Warm Wishes,
    Marilyn (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Eddie Roa (2/2/2009 7:18:00 PM)

    you've captured very well the pain of nostalgia for days long gone. remarkable piece of writing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Zaarah Jasmin (1/26/2009 6:07:00 PM)

    This kinda sooth my soul, i like the way you put the words, very touching indeed! thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 26, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, February 2, 2009


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