A Demigoddess Walks In Diabolic Street Poem by nimal dunuhinga

A Demigoddess Walks In Diabolic Street

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I call you sister as I have a sister of your age.
An Eye-opener; The eye-catching lass seems to be an apprentice.
The dusk falls and in the sky I see birds fly to their roosts.
Sun too lazily drowns in the sea.
You started your career as a novice in this late evening.
In your spring you have to devote for love and enjoy your life.
But you never find it in this thorny path.
And it prickles your soft barefoot.
The street is forbidden for saintly souls and these enigmatic people instead of love they give you sicknesses.
I know that you have immeasurable burdens and my song won’t solve your problems.
Anyway I have a small word with you my dear
Try to catch a poor king and live happily together.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joy Vanderhelm 18 December 2006

Very enigmatic and powerful. I love the title, as well.

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Sue Ann Simar 03 January 2009

I love the title and the sentiments. What is she an apprentice of?

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Duncan Wyllie 24 December 2006

Some amazing sentiments displayed, all by a fine writer of words MERRY CHRISTMAS Love duncan X

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Ranjith Wijekoon 24 December 2006

Great, as usual........ Ranjith

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Sandra Fowler 18 December 2006

Wonderful imagery in this sensitive portrayal of a woman who is living dangerously. Write on, Nimal. Warm regards, Sandra

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Tranquil Ocean 18 December 2006

Good work, Nimal.Your range is overwhelming. TO

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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