A Different World Poem by nimal dunuhinga

A Different World

Rating: 5.0


I was bit drunk and leaning to a lamp post
Then I had a dream of another world exists.
In the day time the moon is visible
Night you could see the sun.
Deaf they hear, blind they see and dumb they talk.
The rocks, trees and animals too communicate.
Cripple they walk.
No thieves, gamblers, liars and smugglers
So there won't be any politicians anyhow?
And money is strictly prohibited.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
kskdnj sajn 26 March 2006

I would love to take a stroll with the tree in my front yard, always there when I get home. :) A smart conclusion and good write. :)

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Linda Ori 01 April 2006

Sounds like a perfect world. If we all had this dream, could it not be so? Linda

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David Gerardino 01 July 2006

won't be any politicians, .............great poem......................

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Sourav Rc 19 July 2006

This is a very interesting poem. Very nicely written.

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Anjana Aravind 16 August 2006

Short and sweet. Well crafted poem. Anjana

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 07 December 2009

Wow! ! Anticlimax galore…and finish is splendid… ‘…And money is strictly prohibited.’ Ten++ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Pia Andersson 12 November 2006

Yes wouldnt that be wonderful..no money nothing to kill or die for I agree A beautiful dream from you. Wishing you a day full of joy-Pia

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Roy Storey 08 November 2006

A land with out money, a dream with out end, one this will be my friend but not in our time. take care Roy.

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Melvina Germain 14 October 2006

A very good write Nimal, another world, no politicians, hmmmm that's OK.------Melvina---

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Pia Andersson 17 September 2006

I like the way you write about the impossible Perhaps part of the impossible can be possible if there would be more people like you around Interesting and different I like it

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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