Ima Ryma


A Dog Of Few Words - Poem by Ima Ryma

A clerk said, 'Next in line - this way.'
A dog spoke up, 'I guess I am.'
'What can we do for you today? '
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Comments about A Dog Of Few Words by Ima Ryma

  • Gold Star - 19,308 Points Sandra Feldman (4/3/2015 9:57:00 PM)

    Good.
    Very original, cute and pleasant. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,911 Points Spock The Vegan (12/19/2014 7:30:00 PM)

    I like it! Keep up the good work. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,911 Points Spock The Vegan (12/19/2014 7:29:00 PM)

    I like it! Keep up the good work. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,545 Points Kim Barney (12/15/2014 5:30:00 PM)

    Hilarious, and written in classic sonnet format.
    Well done. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,415 Points Rajkamal P.j (8/15/2014 4:54:00 AM)

    A great poem really. Very lightly you are giving a strong message. Talented pen. Good luck (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,415 Points Rajkamal P.j (8/15/2014 4:54:00 AM)

    A great poem really. Very lightly you are giving a strong message. Talented pen. Good luck (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 139 Points John Brown (3/6/2014 8:17:00 AM)

    Quite right too. A funny poem. I like it. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 671 Points Saint Cynosure (1/23/2014 6:09:00 PM)

    greatness I love it, you have many that I love. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Onelia Avelar (3/22/2009 3:25:00 AM)

    Clever and witty :)) Well penned. I enjoyed it! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jemarie Ragudo (10/28/2007 4:34:00 AM)

    Bow wow wow. It means WOW! Translated as true appreciation! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mark Tapley (10/18/2007 6:11:00 AM)

    This is nonsense, but it's great.
    That form you use is very effective, gives your pieces a 'punchline' feel, although the punchline may not be funny at all (like in 'Crow Heart' or 'Mystery Plain') .
    Also, the use of classical 'a/b/a/b' rhyme sounds extremely good, in a no-frills, straight-to-the-point sort of way. (Report) Reply










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