A Dolly Bird Is The Seventh Wonder Of My Heart (Triple Rictameter) Poem by Harindhar Reddy
A Dolly Bird Is The Seventh Wonder Of My Heart (Triple Rictameter)
1
Zounds-rounds,
Daffodils, CLEAR
Rills with musk-roses fill -
A feast to eyes of the earth -
Rubens smirks at your adult shapes - hilltop!
You're apple of my eyes - stars
On the sky, birds on trees,
Yow, you're my love.
Zounds-rounds!
2
Trill-brill,
In you, I saw -
Glissando of Rehman's
Pipe and romantic muse of Blake,
Yet, it's the beauty of your love that fills.
It's your swanlike walk, Gilbertian
Talk and curly curves made
Me crazy Lee.
Trill-brill!
3
Yikes-zoiks,
Above all is
Small - You have a slender
Waist, a kind soul, a sweet smile, a
Cute face, fond heart, heaven's charm with Nature's
Grace. Holly-hock, a DOLLY
Bird's the seventh wonder
Of my heart, wow.
Yikes-zoiks!
(Theme: Love/Romance
......................THE END............................
(on 10/08/2012 - Dedicated to Heather Burns)
Novel words: 1) Zounds-rounds = exclamation word 2) Rubens = a Flemish painter 3) Globule = A small globe 4) Trill-brill = thrilling and Brilliant 5) Glissando = melodic tune 6) AR Rehman = Most reputed music director from India 7) Yikes-zoiks = exclamation word.
(*Note: 'Thrill-brill, ' 'Zounds-rounds' & 'Yikes-zoiks' are new reduplicate words created by me. Hope u enjoy my creating words. Dear LIONIZED poets, your review on these new words is duly appreciated. Waiting for Your RESPONSE.....................)
The Rictameter
A rictameter is an interesting, and visually beautiful type of poem. When centered, it looks much like a diamond.
The syllables would look something like this per line: 2,4,6,8,10,8,6,4,2.
There are also 'double rictameters' which is basically one poem, of two rictameters in a row, which again is very visually expressive. This is triple rictameter.
I know not the six wonders of your heart yet the seventh wonder Dolly Bird is really a wonder to many with your novel words. Wish your seventh wonder is Clear to your Dolly!
i have not come across anther poet with your amazingly unique talent! you make ones head zimmer zinz-zing spin!
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4/23/2024 1:52:48 AM # 1.0.0.1119
I know not the six wonders of your heart yet the seventh wonder Dolly Bird is an alluring wonder to many with your novel words and rhyming! Wish your seventh wonder is Clear to your Dolly!