A Door Is Crying Poem by laila lili

A Door Is Crying

Rating: 4.8


The sadness rang my door
My tear opened the door
From me stole my lovers
I still have no lovers
Maybe I am wrong
Maybe the life felt
Oh the word maybe you have so many title
Maybe it is not my fault
Maybe my time is go around
Oh the word maybe you are the sea of secret
You are the sea of we cant go back from it
On the sand of a moan beach
Their steps are like the hurts
My eyes are fulling with the treats
My days are
My dreams are burnt
And the sun which rose at my door
It slept there
Yes sleep in my hurts and in your secret don’t mark it
And which she was my soul isnot absent
She is a forgetting treat
Every time I tried to forget you
My heart screamed I cant
A travel is written we cant to don’t travel it

translated

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Whisperkwane Lamb 11 October 2015

Felt...really feltEvery time I tried to forget you My heart screamed I cant A travel is written we cant to don’t travel it I feel every word...I emotion within your poem...touched me..deep within...sharing is a good thing...thanks

0 0 Reply
Afzal Shauq 29 June 2009

She is a forgetting treat Every time I tried to forget you My heart screamed I cant A travel is written we cant to don’t travel it heart touching romantic idea and short dtory type...lovely written and the way you write is good..impressive...composition of words is also rich..welll done.10++++++++++

0 0 Reply
Kesav Easwaran 08 May 2009

love is a funny ball game...it beats you often at the post... nice expressive write, Laila...10

0 0 Reply
Mehmet YILMAZLAR 10 April 2009

there is something that musnt be forgetten: after every darkness the day will shine around us.and sleeping sun will get up and rose smile with sleepy eyes

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success