A Dream Poem by Kristy Artmann

A Dream

Rating: 5.0


Free from lies
Free from secrets
Free from avoidance
Free from solitude
Free from ignorance
Free from immaturity
Free from delusion
Free from melancholy

Full of love
Full of hope
Full of companionship
Full of trustworthiness
Full of fidelity
Full of open communication
Full of care
Full of maturity

A dream filled with hopes...a dream filled with happiness...then I awake everyday to find a caliginous day and an unpleasant relationship...

~Kristy C. Artmann~ © 2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abha Sharma 11 April 2008

Such dreams are a part of sincere mind and the words penned from a sincere heart.. so a day will come when this will be a reality … the content of the dream is soothing, the anticlimactic end gives your poem a literary attitude. Enjoyed reading it..

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Howard Johnson 07 February 2008

I pulled out my dime store compact webster's dictonary, to help unlock the meaning of this write, great job, Kristy..

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Mz.Honesty Only 25 January 2008

Kristy I like this poem. But to me life can be a dream and a nightmare. I give you a 10.

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