A Dream Poem by Tango

A Dream

Rating: 4.9


You came to me in the middle of the night,
oh, what a beautiful sight.
Your hair was gold, and your eyes were blue,
a nightdress I could see right through.
you came into my bed, and we embraced,
your lips had a wonderful taste.
desire was strong, and love was made,
then i awoke, and watched you fade.

Tango.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 30 March 2015

Beautiful piece of poetry, well articulated and subtly penned to capture the intimacy of a highly seductive moment. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Linda Ori 27 August 2009

Ah.....sometimes the dreamworld can produce such excitement. How sad to awake to nothing but rumpled sheets and reality. This is not overly suggestive, yet you have managed to produce a lovely scenerio with just a few perfect words. Well done! Linda : -)

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Gina Layog 29 April 2009

beautiful, such romance, I love this poetry, its vivid imagery, with a hint of sensuality, just the right touch of mystery...... as soon as daylight came so was she....

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Costa Anakiev 06 April 2009

a good poem and the end is great, i like it best of all (there's some humour here)

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 25 March 2009

Beautifully written - hope that dream revisits - Cindy

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