(England)

What do you think this poem is about?

A Dream Beyond.

To soar beyond a dream
Where happiness runs wild
In abundance over heartache,
(With the imagination of a child) .

Wrapped in a cloud of comfort
Without a worry or a care,
Weaving through the stars above
Their company I`ll share.

A moonbeam will be my guiding light
As I gather peace for all
Surrounded by perfection,
Then back to earth I`ll gently fall.

This imagination I`m afraid
Will always stay surreal,
I have no magic potion
So it will never be ideal.

Submitted: Sunday, April 29, 2012


Comments about this poem (A Dream Beyond. by Heather P Wilson )

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  • * Sunprincess * (12/27/2012 8:36:00 PM)

    this is my dream in my imagination..beautifully written

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  • Ruby Honeytip (11/17/2012 6:09:00 AM)

    A lovely, sparkly piece of happy: -)
    Thank you x

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  • Hari Smith Holms (5/1/2012 9:21:00 AM)

    Mind blowing rhyming scheme.I love it.

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  • Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (4/30/2012 9:58:00 PM)

    i agree with you and like the poem

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  • Juan Olivarez (4/30/2012 1:09:00 PM)

    I love the rhyme and the way this piece flows. Great heather.

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  • Dave Walker (4/30/2012 3:37:00 AM)

    A really wonderful poem, the flow is very beautiful. a really fantastic poem.

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  • Ramesh Rai (4/29/2012 11:41:00 PM)

    A moonbeam will be my guiding light
    As I gather peace for all
    Surrounded by perfection,
    Then back to earth I`ll gently fall.
    a beautiful poem

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  • Valerie Dohren (4/29/2012 3:30:00 PM)

    I'm up there with you Heather - another lovely poem.

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  • Stephen Buoro (4/29/2012 5:25:00 AM)

    Good work, Heather. You showed a great deal of promise here. This piece should be best read aloud because it's rich in sound and a song-like rhythm...

    This is exactly what life is: A Dream Beyond... our understanding...

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  • Samantha Boatwood (4/29/2012 5:02:00 AM)

    I like it a wonderful poem...

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