A Dreamer Yet A Loser Poem by Rudy Rico Castillo

A Dreamer Yet A Loser

Rating: 5.0


I think I just did,
Something that's indeed.
I feel that I feel,
Something that is real.

All things that I've done,
Success has been gone.
I always feel the burst,
Yet experience the worst.

Failure everyday,
Failure every night.
No things have been done right.
I think I have no bright.

I'll say it with eager,
That I can be a winner.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 29 May 2009

Very nice poem with happy ending. My love with 10 in favor of this positive poem.

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Ency Bearis 17 December 2008

a dream to be fulfilled should be with determination...strong guts.. see my poem ' Determination ' and will know what is all about... nice provoking poem..10 Ency Bearis

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