A Drunk Sparrow Poem by maryam balangi

A Drunk Sparrow

Rating: 5.0


A drunk sparrow donot save bean for winter
because it only sing in spring

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

deep thought. you said a lot in a little.

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Romeo Della Valle 20 July 2011

A few words are like sparks that start a huge fire in the Poetry World! Behind those few words is hiding a potential poets that one day may surprise the whole world! Those few words became your stepping stone! Go for it my friend! Keep inspiring the world broadly! 10+++ Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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Jim Troy 16 July 2011

Maryam it is great to see you writing more poetry. You have such a very deep strong spirit that is screaming to show its beauty and it is most delicate at the same time.... In very short expressions your spirit comes through and always paints a beautiful picture for us all to enjoy.... We must look closely for your every stroke of the paint brush to enjoy it on its proper level......... An honor to see you sharing your spirit with us all................ Jim Troy

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