A Fable Poem by Louise Gluck

A Fable

Rating: 4.7


Two women with
the same claim
came to the feet of
the wise king. Two women,
but only one baby.
The king knew
someone was lying.
What he said was
Let the child be
cut in half; that way
no one will go
empty-handed. He
drew his sword.
Then, of the two
women, one
renounced her share:
this was
the sign, the lesson.
Suppose
you saw your mother
torn between two daughters:
what could you do
to save her but be
willing to destroy
yourself—she would know
who was the rightful child,
the one who couldn't bear
to divide the mother.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
G. Akanji Olaniyi 14 October 2015

Interesting to read a well-known story written in this way!

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 July 2020

she would know who was the rightful child, the one who couldn't bear to divide the mother. mother torn between two daughters: tony

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Syed Zaidi 08 October 2020

You get a Nobel prize for this This is about Jewish mothers. Jews control the Nobel.

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Mahtab Bangalee 03 November 2020

what could you do to save her but be willing to destroy yourself—she would know who was the rightful child, the one who couldn't bear to divide the mother. /// superb and fantastic fable// beautiful poetic expression//S/he who is true knows the secret of all things. So s/he gives up the right to everything and remains silent only for peace. The world is still fine for all those great people or deeds.

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naoko fujita 11 October 2020

I now know the resorces of old testament congratulation on your Nobel prize

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naoko fujita. 11 October 2020

we have the same story in JAPAN.

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Trini 09 October 2020

Well-known story from the Old Testament interesting new perspective what daughter wozld I be

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P A Noushad 08 October 2020

Dear Gluck, I am blessed as you are my friend because your verses touch me deeply, I pray for you.

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