Bradley Lester

Rookie (18-07-1966 / Western Cape, Cape Town)

A Few Simple Gestures - Poem by Bradley Lester

These are simple things I'd do, if you were mine to stay
I'd do these things, to show I care, the morn of each new day
I'd make you coffee, muffins too, and set them by your side
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Comments about A Few Simple Gestures by Bradley Lester

  • Gold Star - 5,737 Points Patricia Grantham (11/7/2014 7:02:00 PM)

    A very nice poem to read. I really love your
    way of expressing love in the simplest of
    ways. They are the ones that matters the most.
    Enjoyed. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,414 Points Leslie Philibert (11/7/2014 10:56:00 AM)

    Good poem, but nothing too new, and it falls apart in the last two verses (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 52 Points Rumi Roy (11/7/2014 2:45:00 AM)

    Lovely poem. Love and emotions well expressed. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,202 Points Khairul Ahsan (11/8/2013 12:12:00 AM)

    Good gestures!
    Ours, the lazy ones' lives, will be made a little more difficult if our better halves get an access to your poem.
    However, a very nice poem, and I do appreciate your good meaning gestures... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 36,621 Points * Sunprincess * (11/7/2013 7:15:00 PM)

    amazing this is every girl's dream :) (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,139 Points Krishnakumar Chandrasekar Nair (11/7/2013 7:34:00 AM)

    Washing dishes in the sink
    Fetching books for her to read
    Then with a cup of coffee to walk in
    Is taking Feminism a trifle too far
    In this role reversal I do see
    A big global conspiracy
    And some day you may find
    It be our job to bear babies fine
    While they swish their hips and shine
    And order us about as now husbands we do......

    I meant this in good humour and consider both man and woman equal in everything. I do invite everyone to my page for your esteemed comments. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 281 Points Jack Growden (11/7/2013 5:22:00 AM)

    Brilliant work Bradley! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 867 Points Liliana ~el (11/7/2013 5:15:00 AM)

    Incredible, warm, and touching; I could just imagine and feel the comfort and peace you would bring! Wonderful; thank you! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,219 Points Babatunde Aremu (11/7/2013 2:39:00 AM)

    This is simply wonderful. A responsible act by a responsible man. Great job (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chano Leal (11/12/2012 10:07:00 PM)

    Good, somewhat infantile. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 203 Points Ronn Michael Salinas (11/9/2012 2:02:00 PM)

    Aww you'd get sick though. From the weather. Would she then be able to take care of you in turn? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kezang Dawa (11/8/2012 12:13:00 AM)

    very emotional poem..... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,730 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (11/7/2012 6:37:00 PM)

    the trick of happy life! Bradley! You must be a happy man! You don't go out to play golf? You don't watch the sports channel day and night? very strange, , but your poem is very cute, but I don't like my young to do it everyday, may be once in a while! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Caroline Bulleck (11/7/2012 1:32:00 PM)

    This poem is so sweet and full of love. I love it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Annabel Sheila (8/17/2009 7:28:00 AM)

    An absolute gem! I loved the lyrical flow of your poem! Great choice of words, and the subject matter was tender and sweet! Beautiful job!

    Anna (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Henry Brown (7/18/2009 7:46:00 AM)

    Bradley Bradley Bradley WOW This poem SHINES I love it! ! ! 10++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Maria Daniels (6/14/2009 11:18:00 PM)

    I liked this, Explained well and not too lengthy (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Kefentse Sathekge (5/20/2009 12:30:00 AM)

    aunthentic feelings, warm and timeless.i love the reality of you gestures. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Angelic(Annie) Female (5/11/2009 12:47:00 AM)

    Expressed straight from the heart- and undoubtedly makes one teary eyed. you know, somehow i relate to your feelings and your poems. No wonder you understood my poem well too, because only the hearts living those situations could understand.

    Loved your poem and its dedication- rated 10 buddy :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 274 Points Kesav Easwaran (5/7/2009 4:41:00 AM)

    no stains no stains; you want her to remain only in seem to be a perfect life go to your mail box and open it up...a lot of inviting mails could be waiting you there...
    good write...pleasing to read...10 (Report) Reply

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