A Fire Within Unveiled Poem by Dylan Dowrick

A Fire Within Unveiled

Rating: 4.2


When all of your hope is pinned,
and the 'Preacher Within' has sinned,
don't look for the fiery love in love.

Yet, don't forget the person you knew,
the bird that flew, the wings of the dove,
because without perception 'Above',

The only lucky winner here,
are the bystanders and kiss-blowers,
the ones who stand by sweetly,

With looks of regret,
and faces of pure discretion.
Yet, no one will stand,

No one will stand, a love unflailing,
for or against, the fiery love in love,
because of a fire within unveiling.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lauren Love 24 December 2011

Great job! It does, somehow, show me the otherside of love :) Lauren the Aussie

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Ben Burger 05 September 2011

Well done, keep up the good work

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Romeo Della Valle 05 August 2011

Wow! What a very impressive, well penned and poignant poem that clearly shows that Poetry runs in your blood! I love its imagery and rhymes.10+++ Keep inspiring the World with your talented writes! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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