A Firefly In The World Of Dreams- Poem by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

A Firefly In The World Of Dreams-

Rating: 5.0


closing my eyes I sleep
body floating in darkness
without substance
whether I lay up or down
or sideways
I do not know
there is no direction here
all around me in the blackness
fireflies seemingly twinkled
a vast horde fading away
into unimaginable distance
those were dreams
the dreams of men and women
they were my dreams
I rove the darkness ably
darting and weaving through the sparkles
trying to find you
somewhere across this world of dreams
all glittering in-front of me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cj Heck 14 November 2005

Lovely, sweet and flowing. It does describe a dream perfectly! Hugs to you, CJ

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Uriah Hamilton 14 November 2005

It seems like in dreams we are always searching.

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Lylyanna Pilewski 12 January 2006

cooooooool great picture painted. sweet poem. Lylyanna

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Aesthetically pleasing, endearing and creative

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Brian Dorn 12 December 2006

Wow... dreamy write, Eila! Well done! ! Brian

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Peter Lebuhn 02 March 2006

I do love this one You have captured the essence of human desire As a firefly in this life where do fit; how do fit; what is our place in this world

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Peter Lebuhn 11 February 2006

Eila I love your name E-Laaaaaaaaaaa HMMMMMMMMMM I find I write from dreams. I dream in colour it is really cool. I feel like I am tripping I don't even do drugs. Just very intense about life I guess. I love your work 10 from me on this one Namaste Peter

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Peter Lebuhn 11 February 2006

Eila I love your name E-Laaaaaaaaaaa HMMMMMMMMMM I find I write from dreams. I dream in colour it is really cool. I feel like I am tripping I don't even do drugs. Just very intense about life I guess. I love your work 10 from me on this one Namaste Peter

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