Marvin Brato Sr

Rookie - 122 Points (March 2,1960 / Davao City, Philippines)

' A First Love ' - Poem by Marvin Brato Sr

Reckoning love I obtain
Overflowing like fountain.
Now I feel no emptiness
Every second is happiness.
Love is what i need
Life is wonderful indeed.
Yes I finally found someone
None else but a special one.

Care and true love
A blessing from above.
Being in love so deeply
Attraction so strong really.
Heaven is where we stand,
Under our heart's command
Gentle touches of each hand.

Beautiful world I now dwell
In loving you so well.
Living becomes bright
Lots been going right.
On everything we share
Now I will always dare.
Echo my love freely
Sweet and tenderly.


Comments about ' A First Love ' by Marvin Brato Sr

  • Rookie Darwin Guevarra (11/20/2013 2:51:00 AM)

    Nice! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Anggie Servian (4/29/2008 6:42:00 AM)

    a lovely written poem... You described a first love (guess it's yours) so nicely in a dramatic way. Love it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 4 Points Anabel just Anabel (2/6/2008 10:23:00 PM)

    thnx for the comment...life always makes sure we learn in our way...this is a beaufitul poem...nice structure... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Melvina Germain (9/15/2006 1:18:00 AM)

    LOVE a small word with a huge meaning, I love this poem---Melvina (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,367 Points john tiong chunghoo (9/13/2006 10:03:00 AM)

    every body should love more. love is the only thing that buyilds uop the world. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tracey Collins (9/13/2006 8:47:00 AM)

    Your first love, will always be with U no matter what happen.....nice rite... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Sridhar RVL (9/13/2006 5:31:00 AM)

    Yes.......

    Love Take my 10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 13, 2006

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 3, 2014


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