A Flower Poem by Jolanta Gradowicz

A Flower

Rating: 4.5


A beautiful Flower is growing here
In the sunny, and neat, and tidy place.
Its leaves and petals seem fine and clear.
I dream to pick it gently and embrace.

But the Flower doesn’t belong to me,
And someone else will enjoy its odor.
Someone’s hands planted it under the tree
In the fresh, crystal clear air.

I can’t resist its exceptionality,
And leave it indifferently, and go on.
I look at it with curiosity
While it seduces me in the sun…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Preeti - is here! 07 May 2006

nice poem..love the use of words...esp..teh end..that it seduces u... preets

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Sarwar Chowdhury 14 August 2008

....a fine composition indeed.....10

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~ Jon London ~ 26 May 2008

Such a lovely picture you have painted Jolanta, great imagery with a beautiful flow of words down the page. Thanks for sharing your vision warm wishes Jon

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 19 April 2008

beautiful, lovely poem thanks for sharing

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Nalini Hebbar 22 June 2006

the last line was the best...a short poem...but left a long impression

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Duncan Wyllie 13 May 2006

A wonderful poem, love the style and the aim becomes clear, well done, love duncan X

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