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Who would have thought that perfection was palpable.
Angel speck-less, man can touch, unbelievable!
Beauty wrapped in flesh, the panacea to man's
sore heart is found. I can see her. I truly can!
God's paradigm for creation of women does live.
Her hips are perfect, and her breast substantive;
Tantalizing men, young, and old, to taste of her,
But of the blood of Mary, she is a flower
Uncut, and her nectar is saved for one bee, who
She will wed and become his queen, he - her lord. True
Virtue that transcends into the ethereal. Touch
From heaven, on earth. To whom Herculean much
Efforts were made; where men genuflect in request
To be her lord. But tame, they cannot this lioness
For her heart is unto her like her children.
And I am truly blessed to have her as my friend.
But masked within me are hidden secrets of love -
Undying - for her: my Mona Lisa, above
All other she is to me. So kneeling I pray
That her heart would open to us someday.
Until then, I wait with closed palms, relishing her
All - hoping that I am the bee for this flower.
Then she would be my queen. Now till that moment,
I will be hers to have, and forever.
Leslie Alexis
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Friday, April 30, 2010 |
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Friday, January 20, 2012 |
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Comments about this poem (A Flower Uncut
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Shazza Rixx (10/3/2011 9:48:00 PM)
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Beautiful poem :) 10++++
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Dylan Gaudreault (10/3/2011 2:22:00 PM)
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beautiful. really liked the line 'Uncut. And her nectar is saved for one bee, who
She will wed and become his queen...' made me really get in2 this poem. i am enticed by this touching write. perfect ten!
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ViPiNS PUTHOORAN (10/3/2011 1:17:00 PM)
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Amazing poem... Wonderful imagination...
Meticulously penned lines...excellent and great write... Top marks 10++++
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Dave Walker (10/3/2011 12:04:00 PM)
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Wow. You just blew me away with this.
Great write. Fantastic.
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Crimson Love (10/3/2011 11:49:00 AM)
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This is a magnificent poem, your word choice was well thought out, and interesting poem, truly beautiful.
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Alicia Page (10/3/2011 11:45:00 AM)
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i think its awesome i love it
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Kendzi Samuel (7/18/2011 11:24:00 PM)
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Damn! This is good man! Been readin many of ur poems. Love them a lot. They are like written photographs of beauty.
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