Leslie Alexis

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A Flower Uncut - Poem by Leslie Alexis

Who would have thought that perfection was palpable.
Angel speck-less, man can touch, unbelievable!
Beauty wrapped in flesh, the panacea to man’s
sore heart is found. I can see her. I truly can!

God’s paradigm for creation of women does live.
Her hips are perfect, and her breast substantive,
Tantalizing men, young, and old, to taste of her,
But of the blood of Mary, she is a flower

Uncut, and her nectar is saved for one bee, who
She will wed and become his queen, he - her lord. True
Virtue that transcends into the ethereal. Touch
From heaven, on earth. To whom Herculean much

Efforts were made, where men genuflect in request
To be her lord. But tame, they cannot this lioness
For her heart is unto her like her children.
And I am truly blessed to have her as my friend.

But masked within me are hidden secrets of love -
Undying - for her: my Mona Lisa, above
All other she is to me. So kneeling I pray
That her heart would open to us someday.

Until then, I wait with closed palms, relishing her
All - hoping that I am the bee for this flower.
Then she would be my queen. Now till that moment,
I will be hers to have, and forever.

Comments about A Flower Uncut by Leslie Alexis

  • Rookie - 0 Points Dorothea Forbes (6/2/2014 9:58:00 PM)

    Wow really great poem excellent read. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 10,120 Points Heather Wilkins (6/23/2013 9:36:00 PM)

    beautifully written poem. an uncut flower will last forever. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shazza Rixx (10/3/2011 9:48:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem :) 10++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 22 Points Dylan Gaudreault (10/3/2011 2:22:00 PM)

    beautiful. really liked the line 'Uncut. And her nectar is saved for one bee, who
    She will wed and become his queen...' made me really get in2 this poem. i am enticed by this touching write. perfect ten! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 525 Points Vipins Puthooran (10/3/2011 1:17:00 PM)

    Amazing poem... Wonderful imagination...
    Meticulously penned lines...excellent and great write... Top marks 10++++ (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,130 Points Dave Walker (10/3/2011 12:04:00 PM)

    Wow. You just blew me away with this.
    Great write. Fantastic. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 67 Points Crimson Love (10/3/2011 11:49:00 AM)

    This is a magnificent poem, your word choice was well thought out, and interesting poem, truly beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 21 Points Alicia Page (10/3/2011 11:45:00 AM)

    i think its awesome i love it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kendzi Samuel (7/18/2011 11:24:00 PM)

    Damn! This is good man! Been readin many of ur poems. Love them a lot. They are like written photographs of beauty. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 30, 2010

Poem Edited: Wednesday, November 6, 2013

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