A Fragile Mind Poem by Dave Alan Walker

A Fragile Mind

Rating: 5.0


Faraway voices
like distant Indian drums
footsteps and heartbeats
all rolled into one

A mind so fragile
but yet so strong

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valerie Dohren 15 January 2014

Like love and hate, fragility and strength go hand in hand.

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Maria Goodison 17 January 2014

Short but strong enjoyed it, sometime you can say more without saying anything.

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Kanav Justa 17 January 2014

A mind so fragile but yet so strong , , , , short poem but well written, , ,

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 17 January 2014

we, Indians and people of poor nations seem to be very fragile, but strong enough to live through the hardship..

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Rubab Atwal 18 January 2014

a short but a powerful poem, enjoyed it

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Brian Stafford 07 March 2015

precise and to the point, well done!

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Smoky Hoss 10 March 2014

Truly a poem about life; you've captured, in a few words, the core of us all. The physical, the spiritual, the mental. And you analyzed it spot on: life is a mixture, a balancing blend continually in motion, of fragility and strength.

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Ramesh Rai 02 March 2014

Fragile mind is always powerful or else it is blunt.

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Hazel Durham 26 February 2014

Fragile mind is a place of sensitivity and finds the strength from deep feelings that connect with life! Interesting and powerful write!

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Roseann Shawiak 20 February 2014

Many times the fragile mind is the stronger one in the end for having come through life's trials and struggles without giving up. Spirit adhering to the soul through an invisible faith, kept there through hope. Wonderful poem, short and strong in mind. RoseAnn

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