Dave Alan Walker

Silver Star - 3,684 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

A Fragile Mind - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Faraway voices
like distant Indian drums
footsteps and heartbeats
all rolled into one

A mind so fragile
but yet so strong


Comments about A Fragile Mind by Dave Alan Walker

  • Veteran Poet - 1,765 Points Brian Stafford (3/7/2015 6:41:00 AM)

    precise and to the point, well done! (Report) Reply

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  • Bronze Star - 2,475 Points Smoky Hoss (3/10/2014 5:01:00 PM)

    Truly a poem about life; you've captured, in a few words, the core of us all. The physical, the spiritual, the mental. And you analyzed it spot on: life is a mixture, a balancing blend continually in motion, of fragility and strength. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,641 Points Ramesh Rai (3/2/2014 2:10:00 AM)

    Fragile mind is always powerful or else it is blunt. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,373 Points Hazel Durham (2/26/2014 3:44:00 AM)

    Fragile mind is a place of sensitivity and finds the strength from deep feelings that connect with life!
    Interesting and powerful write! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 18,117 Points Roseann Shawiak (2/20/2014 12:20:00 AM)

    Many times the fragile mind is the stronger one in the end for having come through
    life's trials and struggles without giving up. Spirit adhering to the soul through an
    invisible faith, kept there through hope. Wonderful poem, short and strong in mind.
    RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,541 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (1/24/2014 5:54:00 AM)

    Mind is strong. Provides determination. Nice poem. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 144 Points Rubab Atwal (1/18/2014 7:12:00 AM)

    a short but a powerful poem, enjoyed it (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,289 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (1/17/2014 5:51:00 PM)

    we, Indians and people of poor nations seem to be very fragile, but strong enough to live through the hardship.. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,063 Points Kanav Justa (1/17/2014 6:36:00 AM)

    A mind so fragile
    but yet so strong , , , ,

    short poem but well written, , , (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 122 Points Maria Goodison (1/17/2014 12:42:00 AM)

    Short but strong enjoyed it, sometime you can say more without saying anything. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,266 Points Valerie Dohren (1/15/2014 12:46:00 PM)

    Like love and hate, fragility and strength go hand in hand. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,954 Points * Sunprincess * (1/14/2014 7:16:00 PM)

    ....the mind is one beautiful creation...as well as technology....a thought from your mind can come to me almost instantly...great write... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 13, 2014

Poem Edited: Tuesday, January 14, 2014


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