David Whalen

Veteran Poet - 1,299 Points (5/18/38 / Covington Kentucky)

A Freudian Slip (Who Nose?) - Poem by David Whalen

I want to clear this matter up some way
And at the same time make my point

That love note I sent you the other day?
The one that got your nose all out of joint?

I think I simply typed too fast
And didn’t say what I meant to say

Not …“I like your huge, turnip nose”…
But “I like your cute turned up nose”

Was What I really meant to say

Comments about A Freudian Slip (Who Nose?) by David Whalen

  • Gold Star - 13,703 Points Bri Edwards (12/26/2012 6:35:00 PM)

    nobody ever believes me when i say the wrong thing and try to set them straight. i hope you had better luck. the poem, though not huge, IS cute. thanks. bri guess i'll have to put it on my mypoemslist. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Shirley Hanley (7/27/2010 9:49:00 PM)

    Your first poem made me smile... this one had me laughing my 'arse' off.
    Shirley: -) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 29, 2010

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