Charles Chaim Wax

Very lovely poem. Well-written 'piece' mr.Charles. I'll read more when I return later. I also gave this a 10'.

I like the line 'Such kind children' They have asked him to send fifty dollars worth of flowers, but he will have to part with the doh. So he sent a mass card, because the dead don't know.

daphne Grant

The incongruity of death. One lives, one dies. Who decides? Great poem...

It was kind of humorous....but yet sad.......exquisit! (i dont know how to spell that)

The death of a friend; sad but I found sly humour and the uncertainty through the whole poem specially the last line.Experimental! .........

i absolutly loved your poem a very good poem! ! !
and i too loved your last line 'How does the of a coffin breathe'
~nikky~

a poem must be like this: true, honest, full of live life although it be full of dead people, with verse which stick to you forever. Good luck, your style is like Charles Bukowski's which i adore (i mean both! !) thanks for your poetry!

Another good expression of thought and word, Charles. I love the way your poetry tells 'slice of life' happenings.

well expressed. love it.