A Friends Ungracious Sea Poem by Holly Heron

A Friends Ungracious Sea



My heart it breaks inside,
Because I am just me,
I will not change to others views,
Or give against the tide,
And though the tide does seep,
The life and love from mind,
I am unchanging,
'Cept by the waves of Time.
My friend does find another,
And plots her deep revenge,
Revenge 'cos I'll not give,
To her my life and soul,
She plots thought with another,
And so my hearts not whole.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Albert Wong 05 June 2007

It is not suggested to use the similar words (double words) into one poem, you are now repeating words to next lines. Here are too many same words into one poem. I don't like this kind of writing, I suggest try to use another word after one sentence. Don't use after one just used.

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