Geoff Warden

Rookie (June 11 1962/ / London Ontario Canada)

A Frozen Door!


My Heart
a frozen door
closed by the hands of greed

A moment
one has chose
to shackle and chain down

My Heart
an open door
by one I have never met

space/time
will never change
the miracle she performed........

Submitted: Friday, September 01, 2006
Edited: Tuesday, August 31, 2010

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  • Rookie Daffodil Decarie (10/22/2007 5:29:00 AM)

    I'm envious, this is one of the poems I've read here in poemhunter that I'll say worth a phrase such as; 'A poem well written, thanks for sharing' and leaving all the objective criticism of its poetic devices valid use. lol. Truly simple, sound, smooth idea wraps around the entire text, the whole play of words. Keep it up!

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Tranquil Ocean (6/10/2007 1:36:00 AM)

    My Heart
    An Open Door
    For just You and Me
    Lovely Geoff.Where are you, my friend?
    Love...TO (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Shelley L Baxter-Stanley (4/5/2007 12:36:00 AM)

    I love the simplicity of this piece of poetry. Also the title made me want to read it and see what it was about 'A frozen door! ' Great work and very much a poem that has much meaning and great imagery!
    Keep up the good work.
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  • Rookie Melvina Germain (1/2/2007 12:06:00 AM)

    I have my own take on this one, I'm not 100% sure if I'm right, but of course it's what it means to me the reader isn't it. A truly beautiful piece of writing, I enjoyed the read and will probably come back and read it again and again. Fabulous.
    Melvina (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Duncan Wyllie (9/15/2006 4:39:00 PM)

    Astoundingly beautiful piece of excellence, what a fine art displayed here
    Love duncan X (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ruby Root (9/6/2006 9:00:00 PM)

    Hi Geoff, It sounds like either someone really hurt you, and you closed your heart. I don't know if I am right. Take care Excellent poem. (Report) Reply

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