(June 11 1962/ / London Ontario Canada)

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A Frozen Door!

My Heart
a frozen door
closed by the hands of greed

A moment
one has chose
to shackle and chain down

My Heart
an open door
by one I have never met

space/time
will never change
the miracle she performed........

Submitted: Friday, September 01, 2006
Edited: Tuesday, August 31, 2010

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  • Daffodil Decarie (10/22/2007 5:29:00 AM)

    I'm envious, this is one of the poems I've read here in poemhunter that I'll say worth a phrase such as; 'A poem well written, thanks for sharing' and leaving all the objective criticism of its poetic devices valid use. lol. Truly simple, sound, smooth idea wraps around the entire text, the whole play of words. Keep it up!

    Daffodil

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  • Tranquil Ocean (6/10/2007 1:36:00 AM)

    My Heart
    An Open Door
    For just You and Me
    Lovely Geoff.Where are you, my friend?
    Love...TO

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  • Shelley L Baxter-Stanley (4/5/2007 12:36:00 AM)

    I love the simplicity of this piece of poetry. Also the title made me want to read it and see what it was about 'A frozen door! ' Great work and very much a poem that has much meaning and great imagery!
    Keep up the good work.
    Shelley

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  • Sandra Fowler (1/20/2007 1:48:00 PM)

    What an excellent title! You are a fine wordsmith.

    Kindest regards,

    Sandra

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  • Melvina Germain (1/2/2007 12:06:00 AM)

    I have my own take on this one, I'm not 100% sure if I'm right, but of course it's what it means to me the reader isn't it. A truly beautiful piece of writing, I enjoyed the read and will probably come back and read it again and again. Fabulous.
    Melvina

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  • June30 Tara (12/29/2006 10:51:00 PM)

    Its beautiful, its awsome....
    rgds
    Tara

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  • Original Unknown Girl (11/10/2006 9:04:00 AM)

    I like this one Geoff, succintly put and speaks volumes in so few words! HG: -)

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  • Cecil (CJ) Krieger (10/11/2006 11:56:00 AM)

    What beauty! Fine word well put

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  • Duncan Wyllie (9/15/2006 4:39:00 PM)

    Astoundingly beautiful piece of excellence, what a fine art displayed here
    Love duncan X

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  • Charles M Moore (9/11/2006 9:33:00 PM)

    Nice write, Like the space time continuum from beginning to end.

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