Geoff Warden

Rookie (June 11 1962/ / London Ontario Canada)

A Frozen Door! - Poem by Geoff Warden

My Heart
a frozen door
closed by the hands of greed

A moment
one has chose
to shackle and chain down

My Heart
an open door
by one I have never met

will never change
the miracle she performed........

Comments about A Frozen Door! by Geoff Warden

  • Rookie Daffodil Decarie (10/22/2007 5:29:00 AM)

    I'm envious, this is one of the poems I've read here in poemhunter that I'll say worth a phrase such as; 'A poem well written, thanks for sharing' and leaving all the objective criticism of its poetic devices valid use. lol. Truly simple, sound, smooth idea wraps around the entire text, the whole play of words. Keep it up!

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  • Rookie - 21 Points Tranquil Ocean (6/10/2007 1:36:00 AM)

    My Heart
    An Open Door
    For just You and Me
    Lovely Geoff.Where are you, my friend?
    Love...TO (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 70 Points Shelley L Baxter-stanley (4/5/2007 12:36:00 AM)

    I love the simplicity of this piece of poetry. Also the title made me want to read it and see what it was about 'A frozen door! ' Great work and very much a poem that has much meaning and great imagery!
    Keep up the good work.
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  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (1/20/2007 1:48:00 PM)

    What an excellent title! You are a fine wordsmith.

    Kindest regards,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 22,433 Points Melvina Germain (1/2/2007 12:06:00 AM)

    I have my own take on this one, I'm not 100% sure if I'm right, but of course it's what it means to me the reader isn't it. A truly beautiful piece of writing, I enjoyed the read and will probably come back and read it again and again. Fabulous.
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  • Rookie - 25 Points June30 Tara (12/29/2006 10:51:00 PM)

    Its beautiful, its awsome....
    Tara (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Original Unknown Girl (11/10/2006 9:04:00 AM)

    I like this one Geoff, succintly put and speaks volumes in so few words! HG: -) (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,116 Points Cecil (cj) Krieger (10/11/2006 11:56:00 AM)

    What beauty! Fine word well put (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Duncan Wyllie (9/15/2006 4:39:00 PM)

    Astoundingly beautiful piece of excellence, what a fine art displayed here
    Love duncan X (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Charles M Moore (9/11/2006 9:33:00 PM)

    Nice write, Like the space time continuum from beginning to end. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ruby Root (9/6/2006 9:00:00 PM)

    Hi Geoff, It sounds like either someone really hurt you, and you closed your heart. I don't know if I am right. Take care Excellent poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Sylvia Spencer (9/5/2006 5:32:00 PM)

    Geoff such a great poem an awsome piece of writing.cheers Sylvie (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 39 Points Patricia Gale (9/1/2006 11:36:00 PM)

    Deicing for loves grander. A splendid piece! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 60,485 Points Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (9/1/2006 8:36:00 PM)

    Sir Geoff...succinctly impassioned
    '''''''''''''''''''fjr (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, September 1, 2006

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 31, 2010

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