A Game With Life Poem by Saint Cynosure

A Game With Life

Rating: 5.0


Don't close your eyes,
don't turn away,
for you might miss my move.
I'll take a risk that you don't see,
to sit you up to lose.
Your counting squares,
not pawns my friend,
two steps ahead of self.
And as in life without a plan,
enslavements what is felt.
Take your time no need to rush,
think about your move.
And don't forget what I just said,
don't sit you up to lose.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 18 August 2008

life like the game of chess..nice concept..nicely written... Ency Bearis

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Dee Daffodil 18 August 2008

Nothing like a good chess game to teach us to be three moves ahead of our opponent! Nicely done! Hugs. Dee

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Anjali Sinha 25 August 2008

Ency rightly says Life is a game of chess, Your counting squares, not pawns my friend, two steps ahead of self. nice poem +10 regards anjali

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Shalini Kts 26 August 2008

nice game in poem format

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 03 August 2016

Verily, life is like the game of chess where hasty decisions make us a loser

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*Trusting You* 27 December 2008

Don't close your eyes, don't turn away, for you might miss my move. I'll take a risk that you don't see, to sit you up to lose. your so cocky... I love it! ! ! such a man...lol. PYT

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Ashraful Musaddeq 18 September 2008

A very nice job is done, the title is nice.

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Chitra - 30 August 2008

a cheerful message, uplifts the spirits, and a great metaphor used..games is one thing that build our mental prowess

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Kesav Easwaran 27 August 2008

a nice poem in a game format! nice to read, Saint 10

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