A Garbage Poem With Chracters From Ph Poem by kanav justa

A Garbage Poem With Chracters From Ph

Rating: 4.1


Miss lyn paul has a bad day as some gangsters snatch a golden chain from her neck. she chases them and the story begins.....

lyn paul came running she came with a gun
seeing her angry as hell, all the bad boys did run
she was enraged like a lion and her eyes were fuming red

as she was angry she then lit up a fire
she burn down a house where lived mr nair
made of wood was his huge old ancient bed

i heard galloping of the horses, as i saw mr bri
he stopped his pony when he heard me cry
his mouth agape as he saw the fire blaze

he took out his cell and dialed a number
instead of firemen he called a plumber
in front of our eyes we could see the fire raise

with all his valor he dialed again
but to our surprise it started to rain
rain from cloud made us dance as we did salsa

we waited for the rain to put off the fire
saw a lady coming close she spoke a satire
she scolded us bad and her name was miss valsa

she said you two, you should be inside
bri looked at me, again his mouth opened wide
she had a heart of a soldier, that lady was so damn brave


with a blanket that draped her from head to toe
we called her our friend, and fire our foe
when we looked at her we felt so small and naive

she went inside, all we could do was stare
cause sights like these were few and rare
to have a friend like her, lucky was mr nair

next to come there was rachel nichol
she prayed to the sun to summon a soul
a soul that knew how to put off the evil fire

as we started to talk we saw miss shazia batool
she was witty as she drowned a small pipe in a pool
and from that pipe she drenched mr nairs grand home

everything looked fine, everything looked good
the house started cooling, that was made of wood
miss shajia then spoke, her voice had a sweet tone

seeing everyone helping, bri said that’s enough
he said to me, now let’s get tough
he said again, it was our time to shine

he took out his pen as he started to write
seeing him waste his time, I started to fight
but still he said everything would be just fine

after sometime he spoke what he wrote
laughed a bird from the tree and a black and white goat
the fire lost its fuel as he heard bri's serenade

soon the fire was off, mr nair was fine
all hugged him tight, as we stood in a line
everybody was happy to see the fire fade

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
In this story
RACHEL NICHOLS, LYN PAUL, VALSA GEORGE, BRI EDWARDS, DINESH NAIR, SHAHZIA BATOOL,
I might have offended too many people here as i post this poem. If i have, please let me know. its just a nonsense poem that i wrote, and thought of posting it here. And Dinesh sir, sorry to burn down your house, you were the only one who i could think would rhyme best with fire, , or you could blame it on miss lyn.
and Mr Bri, , , its a revenge poem of mine for you for not sending me a pizza this year: P

PS: If anybody i have offended, please dont block me: P
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 10 January 2014

remind me to never visit the home of Sun Princess (see her comment below) . :)

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Shahzia Batool 10 January 2014

Kanav! ! ! Just for the sake of rhyming with Fire, You made ME do that with the house of Dinesh Nair quietly i wish on PH to Be what will I do if he decides to write an epic against Me? What's the purpose of avenging Mr. Bri? Instead you could have ordered pizza at home for free I can see the enjoyment of Lyn By her comment and her grin... rest assured none will block as you are one of the poets' fine stock!

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Valsa George 13 January 2014

I am happy that our wonderful team work helped put out the fire that was about to burn down the house of poor Mr. Nair. But I can't understand why Lyn should take revenge on him who is no party to the harm done to her by the miscreant youngsters! Bri's dialling the plumber instead of the fire squad is quite interesting! Was his act inadvertent or deliberate, I wonder... his personality being such... (ha..ha) Any way, glad that you have given me such heroic dimensions at this age..! ! .A valiant woman with a soldier's heart... vow! ! Admonishing the two chicken hearted youngster(s) (Is Bri, a youngster?) this brave woman jumped into the fire knowing so well that it could become a funeral pyre, came out miraculously unscathed, (may be because Sunprincess implored the intervention of her father, the Sun and Shahzia came with the hose to spray water) and do what little this brave soul (let me repeat) could do to save one of her great friends... Mr. Nair, from a grave tragedy! ! Oh, Kanav! Your imagination is running riot and you have made it a 'foul smelling garbage'! ! If you clear this mess, I will give you 10 Truly Enjoyed! !

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Poet's Fan 13 January 2014

really enjoyed..: i tis a hilarious poem, , subtle satire.. nice creativity n very much involving...

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Dinesan Madathil 13 January 2014

Oh Rachel, I am sorry that I forgot you are ' sunprincess' yet to be married to 'dreamprince'.

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Robert Murray Smith 22 September 2022

This is a horrible poem, lacking in proper punctuation, capitalization, and meaningful contest. Sorry I had to vote it a one, but zero was not available.

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Bri Edwards 22 September 2022

Janav used to be one of my buddies on PH. Alas, he and plenty of others have disappeared; I'm sure some are dead. Others, like dear Valsa George, have left due to changes on PH. : ( bri

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Rajesh Thankappan 25 November 2014

Hilarious! The words sums it all.

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Om Chawla 09 May 2014

Oh It is such a lovely write, Kanav. I regret not having read it earlier.

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Elena Sandu 25 January 2014

Haha, what a witty pen, how nice of you, it was a big surprise to see our poet friends as heroes of your verse! Thank you!

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