Khairul Ahsan

Gold Star - 8,377 Points (Bangladesh)

A Gentle Touch - Poem by Khairul Ahsan

When you touch me, I can say it's you
Even if my eyes are closed.
For your palms are like text books
That I've read so many times over,
And so they appear so familiar.

When your breath falls on my back,
I can say it's you, without turning around,
For my back has known no other warmth.
All know a soft touch gives goosebumps,
Who knows a silent breath too can do that?

When we hold each other lip locked,
Our tongues do the talking and explore
Like an adventurer to an unknown land.
No force can open your closed eye lids,
Until the tongue talking is over.

A gentle touch, yes a gentle touch!
Can spark two bodies afire.
Neither wants it to remain gentle,
As they want to explode in unison,
And gently cool like an extinguishing fire.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Your touch is warm, your touch can calm.

Dhaka
04 July 2013
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Comments about A Gentle Touch by Khairul Ahsan

  • Bronze Star - 2,388 Points The Princess (1/22/2015 8:02:00 PM)

    Did I read this ever before....or did I not see such a passionate poem of love....I love this one! ! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 329 Points Marilyn Lott (11/6/2014 10:25:00 PM)

    A very sweet and romantic poem. A lot of emotion flows between two people in love. I enjoyed it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - -104 Points Angelique' Rockwell (10/17/2014 6:27:00 PM)

    Very romantic. The knowledge of your partner so deep that knowing them without seeing them for they are engraved in your subconscious. The one person you go through life with sharing the joys and hurts but also come together in passion. Beautifully and simply written. Thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,377 Points Khairul Ahsan (5/5/2014 10:55:00 PM)

    @ Ruma Chaudhuri,
    Thanks for liking my poem and leaving an appreciative comment here. I am inspired. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,377 Points Khairul Ahsan (5/5/2014 10:28:00 PM)

    @ Hira Akhtar
    Thanks for reading my poem and commenting on it. I liked your comment. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 674 Points Ruma Chaudhuri (4/21/2014 9:49:00 AM)

    Excellent poem. Romantic and a feeling of true love. Thanks of sharing this beautiful poem. Ruma (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 59 Points Hira Akhtar (4/20/2014 6:54:00 AM)

    OMG, tis so romantic ;)
    Sorry, I was kidding...lol A beautiful poem indeed about the chemistry of two very closely related persons having such a pure relation without any fear :)
    have a good time :)
    regards
    hira (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,377 Points Khairul Ahsan (4/12/2014 10:31:00 AM)

    @Tanya Ivanova
    Thank you very much for reading my poem and commenting on it. Your appreciation has inspired me.
    Please do not forget to rate the poems while you put your comments. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tanya Ivanova (4/11/2014 11:15:00 AM)

    Beautiful feeling. I have always preferred poetry with rhyme and rhythm, white poems are prose with structure of a poem, but they lack the music, however it is also art (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,377 Points Khairul Ahsan (4/8/2014 11:15:00 AM)

    @Yash Shinde
    Thank you very much for reading my poem and leaving your comment here. Thanks for the appreciation, I appreciate! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,377 Points Khairul Ahsan (4/8/2014 7:31:00 AM)

    @Ahmed Abomahfouz
    Thank you very much for reading my poem and leaving your comments there. Thanks a lot for the appreciation and many more thanks for including it in your list of favorite poems. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 122 Points Yash Shinde (4/8/2014 6:58:00 AM)

    a gentle touch.the touch that sends butterflies through your stomach......................an emotional, beautiful write.................... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 140 Points Ahmed Abomahfouz (3/1/2014 2:37:00 AM)

    you have also a magic touches in every verse of the poem. the idea of the poem is creative too and you presented it in a way full of emotions and have have the suspense.
    you played this peace of art very successfully
    choosing it as one of my favuorite poems (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,377 Points Khairul Ahsan (2/23/2014 12:25:00 PM)

    @Amitava Sur,
    Thanks for reading my poem and liking it. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,402 Points Amitava Sur (2/15/2014 12:21:00 AM)

    Nice one, liked the gradual ascending in the pathway of love and lust. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,377 Points Khairul Ahsan (1/3/2014 8:05:00 PM)

    @Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon,
    Thank you very much for reading my poem and leaving your well thought comment here.
    I am inspired. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,102 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (1/3/2014 1:07:00 PM)

    Pregnant with a passion that penetrates. Well done my friend. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,377 Points Khairul Ahsan (12/28/2013 8:12:00 PM)

    @ Beach Girl,
    Thanks for reading my poem and commenting on it.
    'I love how this poem begins with subtle passionate feelings, but then suddenly ignites into something more. Loved it, '
    You are right, the passion increased profoundly, and suddenly.
    May be I had felt like that while I was writing the poem.
    Thanks for the nice words and the generous 10/10. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,377 Points Khairul Ahsan (12/28/2013 8:02:00 PM)

    Dear Katerina,
    Thanks for liking my poem and for your generous *claps*! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 324 Points Beach Girl (12/28/2013 12:47:00 PM)

    I love how this poem begins with subtle passionate feelings, but then suddenly ignites into something more. Loved it, gave it a 10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 4, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, August 11, 2014


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