Dave Alan Walker

Silver Star - 3,860 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

A Ghost That Can'T Let Go - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Sleeping in daylight
too scared to sleep at night
there's voices in my head
from people who are dead

They say that they
want to talk to me
to tell me about the past

But I don't
want to talk to them
because I know
I died with them that night


Comments about A Ghost That Can'T Let Go by Dave Alan Walker

  • Gold Star - 14,713 Points * Sunprincess * (3/21/2014 10:50:00 AM)

    ....this is so true..enjoyed this write.. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 15,578 Points John Westlake (3/21/2014 5:45:00 AM)

    Very interesting, makes a reader want to know more. Mysterious and enjoyable (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 255 Points Skywee Gh (11/14/2013 4:20:00 PM)

    wow, a fine poem that reminds me of me.thank mon. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,068 Points Kanav Justa (11/8/2013 1:20:00 AM)

    A mysterious poem you wrote... loved it (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,844 Points Noreen Carden (11/6/2013 7:02:00 PM)

    Hello Dave A very interesting poem We all want to know what happened that night. Very enjoyable read (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 194 Points Anand Brown (11/6/2013 7:47:00 AM)

    Enjoyed this one Dave! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,010 Points Susan Lacovara (11/5/2013 7:52:00 PM)

    I consider the spirits of those who passed as old friends, their visits, be them in dreams, familiar voices, or just a presence, felt...welcomed and not to be feared....rather embraced...listen to the whispers of your life. Is there pain attached to the departed? Well written and lingering....PEACE (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 287 Points marvin brato (11/1/2013 3:09:00 AM)

    Conscience always rings our mind, talking to us about the dead past! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,063 Points Heather Wilkins (10/16/2013 5:33:00 PM)

    go ahead talk with them. they won't hurt you. they are just in another dimension a good write (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,005 Points Lyn Paul (10/12/2013 9:00:00 AM)

    Listen just once.. You may be surprised, ...Just what did happen that night? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Daniela Cesta (10/10/2013 10:30:00 AM)

    beautiful but have no fear of the dead
    death is only a change of worlds... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Daniela Cesta (10/10/2013 10:28:00 AM)

    all welldone dear Dave (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,699 Points Anthony Di''anno (10/6/2013 3:44:00 AM)

    Quite spooky and a tad disturbing this one Dave. What happened on that fateful night?
    Well written. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 78 Points Bright Morn (10/5/2013 12:04:00 PM)

    there is too much in this short peice. very good write (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,714 Points Neela Nath (10/4/2013 10:29:00 AM)

    An eerie atmosphere is created successfully10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,228 Points Thomas A Robinson (10/1/2013 5:00:00 PM)

    Just a phantasmagoria of your mind, drifting in and out. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,680 Points Valerie Dohren (10/1/2013 1:37:00 PM)

    Ghosts of the past so often do haunt us. Good one Dave. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,250 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (10/1/2013 1:57:00 AM)

    with every death of our beloved ones, a part of us is lost.
    great philosophy in this poem, Dave. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 35,597 Points Gajanan Mishra (9/30/2013 9:28:00 PM)

    what is an age my dear poet? what is death? you have put so many questions here in this poem. congratulation, very fine write. please read my poems and comment. especially'Family members' and vote. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,692 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (9/30/2013 4:13:00 PM)

    Past keeps haunting. It's better to feel dead than listen to the ghosts. Beautifully said. Thank you Dave. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 28, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, September 30, 2013


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