A Girl Lost Her Friend Poem by roushan banu

A Girl Lost Her Friend

Rating: 5.0


Though you left me apart.....
Though you never think about me anymore......
Though you don't want me anymore.....
Though you have new friends who replace me.....
Though you are happy with others...
Just one thing you do for me...
Spend a few minutes and....
Think about the past you spent with me.....
That day for sure i will feel you.....
Tears in your eyes....
Smile in your lips.....
That's enough.....
My HEART still begs for your friendship......
I WANT YOU BACK......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Satuated with sadness.Keep writing.

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fareed..... a wing less bird 18 December 2011

is this about a friend u lost three years back? ? ?

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Kurt Behle 11 March 2009

Good I could say! but next time add some rythmic word fill it not just with emotion but also with passion. well I give it 'Average' sorry 5/10

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what a feelings............ really good..

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Eyan Desir 07 February 2009

THats, is nice..........

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Vinod Kumar 05 February 2009

Nice poem, A contemporary importance is there, thanks for sharing,10+

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