Ernestine Northover

Rookie - 110 Points (25th March 1943)

A Golden Sphere


A golden sphere is lifting up so slowly in the east,
The eye is looking towards it, and seeing such a feast,
Blazing with bands of colour, and giving a wondrous heat,
A view that to each observer, is something so complete.

The sphere goes on its journey, and starts slowly rising,
In different coloured guises, it begins such advertising,
Above the trees and fields, of this silent waiting land,
With a spectacle so splendid, so magnificent and grand.

A whole range of hues are seen, within this fiery glow,
Changing as the hours pass by, it then starts sinking low,
And if seen in splendid glory, is a wonderful imposing sight,
Out to the west, where it disappears into our moonlit night.

© Ernestine Northover

Submitted: Tuesday, November 29, 2005
Edited: Sunday, January 06, 2008

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  • Rookie Afzal Shauq (7/24/2009 10:56:00 AM)

    A whole range of hues are seen, within this fiery glow,
    Changing as the hours pass by, it then starts sinking low,
    And if seen in splendid glory, is a wonderful imposing sight,
    Out to the west, where it disappears into our moonlit night

    what a lovey stanza of your rich poem is this one.. the poem is really written with a professional way and the idea is thoughtful.. deep and meaningful enough..well done dear poetess friend.. like your poetry.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yelena M. (7/24/2009 1:38:00 AM)

    A very inspiring and bright poem with perfect rhythm and rhyme, a real joy to read, recite and imagine..Thanks for sharing, Ernestine.
    A. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Sid John Gardner. (6/17/2009 11:43:00 AM)

    What a fantastic thought.Witnessing a full 24 hours watching the firmament and its changes.Weather permitting of course and shared with good company.Great poem Ernestine.
    Sid xx. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Francesca Johnson (9/10/2007 11:49:00 AM)

    Your poem has been voted on 40 times (I've just added my '10') and no wonder. It's beautiful, Ernestine.

    Love, Fran xxx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dan Tharp (3/5/2006 4:42:00 PM)

    There is nothing like watching a sunrise or for that matter, a sunset! ...

    I noticed a typo in the last line. I believe 'is' should be 'it'? ...

    dan (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Scarlett Treat (2/8/2006 4:50:00 PM)

    Sunrise, sunset - how quickly the days are gone. Sad, yet hopeful that that old sun will continue his journey. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Duncan Wyllie (1/24/2006 3:45:00 PM)

    A golden sphere
    Another beautiful observation of creation that clearly warms the heart!
    Excellent! .Pure! . Love Duncan (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Declan McHenry (11/29/2005 3:52:00 PM)

    Very vivid Ernestine. I particularly like the flow of the rhyme in the first two lines of the second verse. For some reason I found them most relaxing. You're onto something here. Mood poetry! (Report) Reply

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