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Rebecca R.
(11/17/2009 11:55:00 AM) |
This is a great piece of poetry, and I can relate to it, often I feel alone and without purpose, everyone has left and it is just me sitting alone wondering 'what's next'. I give it a 10 :)
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Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty
(11/13/2009 1:44:00 PM) |
But gravestone bears subtle memory and sings in soprano and baritone the adieu of…
Nice poem you gave a somber poetic outfit to gravestone. They’re alone but not lone!
10++ for the departed souls.
dr.sakti
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Sathyanarayana M V S
(11/13/2009 10:35:00 AM) |
.......'non for company? ? ? ? ? '
What happend to other spirits; aren't they sitting on their graves? ? ? ? hahahaha
A wondrfully unique poem. Very well composed in few words. Excellent.
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Sathyanarayana M V S
(11/13/2009 10:31:00 AM) |
.......'non for company? ? ? ? ? '
What happend to other spirits; aren't they sitting on their graves? ? ? ? hahahaha
A wondrfully unique poem. Very well composed in few words. Excellent.
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Sathyanarayana M V S
(11/13/2009 10:30:00 AM) |
.......'non for company? ? ? ? ? '
What happend to other spirits; aren't they sitting on their graves? ? ? ? hahahaha
A wondrfully unique poem. Very well composed in few words. Excellent.
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Carla Nestoros
(10/26/2009 7:16:00 AM) |
I love this poem. Very beautiful and haunting.10.
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Anne Unknown
(10/2/2009 12:26:00 AM) |
Nicely written, I like the details in your poem and I can very much relate to it because my grandpa died. Very beautiful....10++++
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Arkay Dass
(9/22/2009 9:14:00 PM) |
a 'grave' rumination..very sensitive, , , , , never stony, , , the ultimate truth comes in its own way...one finds no rhyme or reason, , thanx
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David Scott
(9/22/2009 4:31:00 PM) |
Nicely written, Carol. Definitely something to bring on the spirit of Halloween next month. Good work.
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