A Halo For A Ring Poem by suzan gumush

A Halo For A Ring

Rating: 5.0


I thought I'd bring you
A ray of sunshine
Make you all smile
And make your life worthwhile
I believe that's what we all should bring
United we should sing
To live is to breathe
And not catch any desease
Is the most gifted thing
We should all form
And not create a storm
And wear A halo
That's worth more than a diamond ring

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 24 September 2006

You have written a very touching letter to the world. Take care, Suzan. Kindest regards, Sandra

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Nermin Nazim 01 October 2006

You are totally right my dear. Very well written and a good message, but are people listening nowadays? I hope some are! Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece. nermin

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There are more of us than there are of them and we are right! Esra Sloblock

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Nathan Strange 26 November 2006

yeah i like this, its better than alot of the crap so many people keep posting

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Patricia Gale 28 December 2006

Beautiful advice....

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Liebling Jacobsen 19 October 2008

this was a really pretty poem. just lovely. keep up the great writing

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Miss Lavender 20 September 2008

a great poem... if people know that nothing would stop good meaning except them..they would make what they think it's possible to make...thanks

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Margaret Carruthers 16 September 2008

So true, so true! ! If only we all used these actions.....

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Dawn Slanker 06 August 2008

Spiritual, poignant, and provocative. Lovely write.

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Chitra - 02 August 2008

insightful and inspiring

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