A Haphazard, Tattered Torn Heart! Poem by Michael Gale

A Haphazard, Tattered Torn Heart!

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A saddened day, a tattered torn heart...
perhaps one day soon, we will have a new
fresh, loving start.It bemoans me to say to
you this day...How can we begin anew to
jointly, and heartily stay? Our hope, together,
shall be granted, after we pray.My oath of
love to you, i give and say.A haphazardness
venture in time...Will enable me to
poetically impress you with rhyme.Hence
we may combine our two hearts...May it
forever more, be off the charts!

02-11-2006'.


Michael Jeffrey Gale

Copyright ©2006 Michael Jeffrey Gale

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Melvina Germain 01 September 2006

I love (Tattered Torn Heart) , I've used that in my poetry as well, it's also in a rhythm & Blues song. Tattered Torn, Love it---Melvina

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Scarborough Gypsy 17 February 2006

'A haphazardness venture in time', this line doesn't sound right to me. I think it should read 'A haphazard venture in time' in order to make any sense. I found this to be an intertesting and heart felt poem but needs a little fine tuning. Kind regards Gyp's

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Michael Gale

Michael Gale

Chicago Illinois/Oklahoma City.
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