A Heart And A Question! Poem by Romeo Della Valle

A Heart And A Question!

Rating: 4.7


Why did you trespass
The boundaries set by my heart?
You became an intruder,
Like a burglar at midnight
Stealing the most valuable jewels
Of now, this empty house!
Of yourself, you deprived
The chance of becoming my spouse...
MY great love and principles you defied,
Playing with my honest feelings,
And as result, down you really fell...
For stealing my precious heart,
Now, I charge you with a felonious crime,
And for making my life a pure hell,
For you, I have a big surprise,
Wait! until you find out! ...

With a thief like you,
It is not worthy to stick around...
There is not forgiveness or gratitude,
You became ugly, with an attitude...
You thought of making me weak,
But you failed, you enhanced my fortitude,
Instead, Yes indeed!
Now, of life, I am very proud,
No more tears or feeling lonely,
Because of you, I became,
'The One and Only'...!


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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ronn Michael Salinas 10 January 2010

'The one and only'. That could be interpreted a lot of different ways.

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Lady Grace 11 January 2010

ok, this is fine...u can't question the heart coz it can detect..the piece is very catching..it is very nice..

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Mohammed Hassan 11 January 2010

that is so amazing i love it and the words you used are so brilliant and it's all about the brain not the heart, hearts don't love brains who tell who to love and who to hate keep it up 10++++

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Bill Khaki 11 January 2010

i like the ending of the poem a good resolution to the whole tension set before. keep it up buddy and stay blessed.

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Emu Getachew 11 January 2010

Your ability to express your despair through words is apparent. The beauties of life’s experiences are never far away from words and you my friend are wordsmith. Thanks for the invite.

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Heather Wilkins 15 June 2013

beautiful write Romeo. very touching and emotional.

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Katherine Land 05 May 2011

Bravo! I really felt this. My heart broke, then I got stronger with you! <3

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 25 February 2010

very well expressed poem right from the heart

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Ritty Patnaik 18 February 2010

a heartfelt love poem.....enjoyed it through! best wishes.....ritty

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Kobik William 21 January 2010

Very good poem. I wouldn't want to be in those shoes though!

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