Lindemberg Pereira da Silva

Rookie (04/03/1985 / Brazil)

A Heart Like A Clown - Poem by Lindemberg Pereira da Silva

It was a sadly joke,
your love made fun at me.
I felt my heart like a clown,
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Comments about A Heart Like A Clown by Lindemberg Pereira da Silva

  • Rookie - 15 Points Amy Marie (6/1/2011 12:51:00 PM)

    I like how strong the passion in this poem is. Everything is worded so well. Afterall, poetry is a great expression for those kinds of feelings. It also makes me wonder if it's a true story. Keep it up! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Shadow Girl (5/4/2011 11:28:00 AM)

    Wow! Great poem. Full of emotion and meaning. Great imagery. Fantastic! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 873 Points Naida Nepascua Supnet (4/23/2011 8:35:00 PM)

    it is sad. but i like the lines, 'i trusted what I read in your eyes, and every single word from your lips'
    you see, loving is trusting so much, and you won't believe other people, maybe that is what you did, if ever your story did not make it to happy ending, at least you have done your part.
    also love is a gamble and you are not sure what will happen at the end...
    so just think of it that way..
    these are what i thought of after reading your nicely written poem. (Report) Reply








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