Ahmad Shiddiqi

Rookie (March 7,1974 / Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia)

a home for a person in heaven


a home for a person in heaven
who gives up arguments
even if he is on the truth
who gives up lying
even while joking
who has a high standard
of character in life

Submitted: Friday, August 14, 2009

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Rachel Ann Butler (11/3/2009 1:15:00 PM)

    'who has a high standard
    of character in life'

    Rachel Ann Butler (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Luwi Habte (9/21/2009 2:50:00 PM)

    wow, nice peice
    love the rythm
    luwi (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 43 Points Obinna Eruchie (9/13/2009 8:58:00 AM)

    Ah! What a wonderful message on attaining peace. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nithya Raghavan (9/3/2009 1:10:00 AM)

    that was a good one..i felt that it could have been a little longer using some poetic devices but the message was precise and perfect. keep it up! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ruerd Visser (8/30/2009 1:51:00 PM)

    Wow lets bring some of this heaven down to earth!
    Would you do me the honor to read and comment on my latest work the wish of the heaven which will appear tomorrow?

    may angels guide you

    Boomwhisperer Ruerd (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (8/29/2009 4:46:00 AM)

    well said in a few...............10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 56 Points Surya . (8/28/2009 7:03:00 PM)

    sure1 how true! beautiful poem.voted10
    surya (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kuji Soliman (8/28/2009 8:32:00 AM)

    a home for a person in heaven
    who gives up arguments
    these are my favourite lines!
    good job (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Rajaram Ramachandran (8/28/2009 7:10:00 AM)

    He can even make a heaven on this earth, if he followis your ideas. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 29,744 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/28/2009 5:47:00 AM)

    home for a person in heaven
    who gives up arguments
    even if he is on the truth
    who gives up lying
    even while joking
    who has a high standard
    of character in life..........always nobllity pays not only on earth but uin heaven too..i admire the skill and presentation....10

    read mie go back....visiting hell..(place to vist once) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ****tamara Hanaring.****** , A Thought Mate, (8/21/2009 7:26:00 PM)

    to have high standards in your chracter is taste of heaven in itself, it gives pleasure for you before giving it to others...those one who maintain their level of their heavenly manners do find their pleasure when they sip from thier treasure...apassionated and deep topic...beautifully said (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Lynda Robson (8/21/2009 5:38:00 AM)

    Heaven welcomes such people,
    10
    Lynda xx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Seema Aarella (8/19/2009 8:36:00 AM)

    A person like him only can find a place in heaven.....heaven will be honoured by his presence! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 639 Points Louis Rams (8/16/2009 10:29:00 PM)

    he joins the great of the great, because now he is with family who have led the way, and prepared for his stay.

    a ten (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Maria Barbara Korynt (8/16/2009 9:19:00 AM)

    We will always think, what is happening with the ones, which are walking away, which we loved. We are worrying, because we want they to hit there, where in our opinion, they are deserved. It just causes that they until the end aren't walking away. We will always recall them and they took the example from the life which it is worthwhile imitating. I think, that it juz not our worry which are taking the place. If they were canceled from the earthly way, certainly God and Angels will take care so that it is an appropriate place. That now, is... smile, please, the father will see it, and he will be glad. You can believe me, I know what I am saying. Don't be sad. Greetings. Maria Barbara Korynt (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (8/15/2009 2:12:00 PM)

    lovely written profound craft...blissful thoughts about home for him...10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Luwi Habte (8/15/2009 12:24:00 PM)

    nice poem,
    well penned as usual
    Luwi (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Omar Ibrahim (8/15/2009 12:16:00 PM)

    i want to live in the heaven......don't you? (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,001 Points Marieta Maglas (8/15/2009 11:06:00 AM)

    a wonderful poem, very well penned with deep thoughts............10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 43 Points Obinna Eruchie (8/15/2009 9:34:00 AM)

    Yes, there is heaven at home, if one is wise enought to learn to be true at heart by being open and sincere. (Report) Reply

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