Treasure Island

Ahmad Shiddiqi

(March 7,1974 / Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia)

a home for a person in heaven


a home for a person in heaven
who gives up arguments
even if he is on the truth
who gives up lying
even while joking
who has a high standard
of character in life

Submitted: Friday, August 14, 2009

Do you like this poem?
0 person liked.
0 person did not like.

What do you think this poem is about?



Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Comments about this poem (a home for a person in heaven by Ahmad Shiddiqi )

Enter the verification code :

  • Nithya Raghavan (9/3/2009 1:10:00 AM)

    that was a good one..i felt that it could have been a little longer using some poetic devices but the message was precise and perfect. keep it up! (Report) Reply

  • Ruerd Visser (8/30/2009 1:51:00 PM)

    Wow lets bring some of this heaven down to earth!
    Would you do me the honor to read and comment on my latest work the wish of the heaven which will appear tomorrow?

    may angels guide you

    Boomwhisperer Ruerd (Report) Reply

  • Kuji Soliman (8/28/2009 8:32:00 AM)

    a home for a person in heaven
    who gives up arguments
    these are my favourite lines!
    good job (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/28/2009 5:47:00 AM)

    home for a person in heaven
    who gives up arguments
    even if he is on the truth
    who gives up lying
    even while joking
    who has a high standard
    of character in life..........always nobllity pays not only on earth but uin heaven too..i admire the skill and presentation....10

    read mie go back....visiting hell..(place to vist once) (Report) Reply

  • ****tamara Hanaring.****** , A Thought Mate, (8/21/2009 7:26:00 PM)

    to have high standards in your chracter is taste of heaven in itself, it gives pleasure for you before giving it to others...those one who maintain their level of their heavenly manners do find their pleasure when they sip from thier treasure...apassionated and deep topic...beautifully said (Report) Reply

  • Seema Aarella (8/19/2009 8:36:00 AM)

    A person like him only can find a place in heaven.....heaven will be honoured by his presence! (Report) Reply

  • Louis Rams (8/16/2009 10:29:00 PM)

    he joins the great of the great, because now he is with family who have led the way, and prepared for his stay.

    a ten (Report) Reply

  • Maria Barbara Korynt (8/16/2009 9:19:00 AM)

    We will always think, what is happening with the ones, which are walking away, which we loved. We are worrying, because we want they to hit there, where in our opinion, they are deserved. It just causes that they until the end aren't walking away. We will always recall them and they took the example from the life which it is worthwhile imitating. I think, that it juz not our worry which are taking the place. If they were canceled from the earthly way, certainly God and Angels will take care so that it is an appropriate place. That now, is... smile, please, the father will see it, and he will be glad. You can believe me, I know what I am saying. Don't be sad. Greetings. Maria Barbara Korynt (Report) Reply

  • Obinna Eruchie (8/15/2009 9:34:00 AM)

    Yes, there is heaven at home, if one is wise enought to learn to be true at heart by being open and sincere. (Report) Reply

Read all 27 comments »

PoemHunter.com Updates

New Poems

  1. This Is Our Mega City, Bijay Kant Dubey
  2. Love is a Liquid ~~~ vs.55, Monk E. Biz
  3. Global Village, Bijay Kant Dubey
  4. PRETTY GOOD START.., ging taping
  5. Draw me in your heart, Nehemiah Theophylus Haokip
  6. The thirst is a thorn., Rm.Shanmugam Chettiar.
  7. Simple toys, hasmukh amathalal
  8. Acquaintance across the gender, Rm.Shanmugam Chettiar.
  9. Begining of my love, Nehemiah Theophylus Haokip
  10. What is all truth, Nehemiah Theophylus Haokip

Poem of the Day

poet Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

When the hours of Day are numbered,
And the voices of the Night
Wake the better soul, that slumbered,
To a holy, calm delight;

Ere the evening lamps are lighted,
...... Read complete »

 

Modern Poem

 

Trending Poems

  1. 04 Tongues Made Of Glass, Shaun Shane
  2. Footsteps of Angels, Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
  3. Still I Rise, Maya Angelou
  4. Daffodils, William Wordsworth
  5. The Road Not Taken, Robert Frost
  6. If You Forget Me, Pablo Neruda
  7. Primary Colours, vince gullaci
  8. Annabel Lee, Edgar Allan Poe
  9. Do Not Stand At My Grave And Weep, Mary Elizabeth Frye
  10. Alone, Edgar Allan Poe

Trending Poets

[Hata Bildir]