A Hope Poem by rahul sharma

A Hope

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Do you know when sunsets,
what creates a feel of pleasure in me,
a hope that it will rise again.............

Do you know when rain stops,
what make me to dance with joy,
a hope that one day, I am going to see it again...........

Do you know in the dark,
what make me smile,
a hope that again this world will be able to see the light..........

Do you know when somebody dies,
what consoles my heart,
a hope that, he got peace from the problems of this world................

Do you know when somebody cries,
what give me a support of relaxation,
a hope that sadness is not permanent................

Do you know in the winter,
what makes me happy,
a hope that spring is not so far..............

Do you know instead of all problems in my life,
what makes me to live my life,
a hope that one day, I am going to make someone smile.............................

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

:) wonderful, optimism is key to surviving in this depression world.. or you can write tons and leave in.. mentally.

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Raj Nandy 08 September 2009

A GOOD DEED DONE, NORMALLY GETS RETURNED! IF YOU CAN MAKE SOMEONE SMILE, HALF YOUR BATTLE IS WON! Thanks for inviting me! -Raj Nandy

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Siddharth Singh 09 September 2009

The poem comes across as a guiding light for the reader. Nice work.

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Shilpa Luthra 09 September 2009

This is so very good and an inspiring one.. Good Job.. Keep on writing

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Ranjit Ravindran 09 September 2009

This poem radiates a great deal of positive energy...

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Bushra Hussaini 07 November 2009

magnificent poem, very inspiring and very sweet...good work rahul! ! !

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Rajaram Ramachandran 01 November 2009

Man is always living on hopes like this. He expects that tomorrow will be better than today.

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Swatimalya Chattopadhyay 13 October 2009

Wonderful.We live in the alterations of happiness and sorrow, nothing is permanent on this earth. White will be more discernible to us, if we have tasted black; after traversing a long tunnel, the light at the end will be more glorified.

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Ben Gieske 26 September 2009

You provide a lot of thoughts to ponder. Keep on smiling. That's the best way to spread the hope.

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Obinna Eruchie 26 September 2009

A positive message of hope.

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