Treasure Island

Rekha Mandagere


A Humble Advice


Look at the glowing golden Sun
Brightens up the world with radiant beam
Never stops his shine even for fun
Ever stands as a leader of the team
Feeling the radiance of his lovely hues
My heart is filled with greater joys
The light rays said in lovely voice
Roads to reach the goals are hard
Never think from it a yard
Life is not a funny game
Every moment is challenge to tame
Wisely choose the future road
Expand your horizon much more broad
But you are my only lovely son
Born to reach the height of the sun
Patience is the key to win
Tolerance will take you far from sin
Always keep the spirits up
Success would surely round you up!

Submitted: Sunday, July 17, 2011
Edited: Thursday, August 07, 2014

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  • Khairul Ahsan (7/17/2013 11:53:00 AM)

    Always keep the spirits up
    Success would surely round you up!
    Very appropriate advice of a worthy mother to a worthy son. (Report) Reply

  • Shahzia Batool (7/3/2013 2:46:00 PM)

    QUOTABLE LINES! ! !

    Life is not a funny game
    Roads to reach the goals are hard
    Wisely choose the future road
    Expand your horizon much more broad
    Always keep the spirits up
    Success would surely round you up! (Report) Reply

  • Chandra Thiagarajan (9/27/2012 6:19:00 AM)

    The humble advice to your son is for all children.An inspiring poem taking inspiration from the Sun.Really nice and enjoyable.Thanks and best wishes. (Report) Reply

  • Gordon Tseng (11/16/2011 12:17:00 AM)

    Great work! I love it!
    What a blessing for your son to have a poet mother like this!
    Well, maybe I should try one for my daughter, too. (Report) Reply

  • Jinal Oswal (10/19/2011 3:50:00 AM)

    So true... this is really a very good advice :)
    I loved the lines
    'Patience is the key to win
    Tolerance will take you far from sin' (Report) Reply

  • Hosny Soliman (10/3/2011 8:36:00 PM)

    Well done, how your words are very expressive as a great caring mother.Also all your advices are with a very elegant way.Your words are so simple so easy to find its way to your son's heart.With all my pleasure and honor accept me as one of your friends. (Report) Reply

  • Vinod Kumar (7/27/2011 12:51:00 PM)

    Great Motherhood the Original Bharath Civilzation that was in-built each and every mothers not in other places in the world once again thanks Ma 10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Bernard Snyder (7/19/2011 9:07:00 PM)

    This was a very nice and well expressed 'piece' Rekha! This was writtten with so much passion as usual. I gave this a 10 as well! (Report) Reply

  • Antonio Liao (7/19/2011 2:56:00 AM)

    “Shutter in the limbo of darkness”, a little rays glow that leads the pavement to
    happiness of desire....a poem of deliverance and passion to love beyond wisdom of human impulse...thank you and God bless, a star and a 10 +++ (Report) Reply

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