A Humble Advice Poem by Rekha Mandagere

A Humble Advice

Rating: 5.0


Look at the glowing golden Sun
Brightens up the world with radiant beam
Never stops his shine even for fun
Ever stands as a leader of the team
Feeling the radiance of his lovely hues
My heart is filled with greater joys
The light rays said in lovely voice
Roads to reach the goals are hard
Never think from it a yard
Life is not a funny game
Every moment is challenge to tame
Wisely choose the future road
Expand your horizon much more broad
But you are my only lovely son
Born to reach the height of the sun
Patience is the key to win
Tolerance will take you far from sin
Always keep the spirits up
Success would surely round you up!

Sunday, July 17, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: advice
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard Snyder 19 July 2011

This was a very nice and well expressed 'piece' Rekha! This was writtten with so much passion as usual. I gave this a 10 as well!

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 20 July 2011

the last four lines are golden lines. shan

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Hans Vr 20 July 2011

Wonderful advice,10+++++++++++++

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Vinod Kumar 27 July 2011

Great Motherhood the Original Bharath Civilzation that was in-built each and every mothers not in other places in the world once again thanks Ma 10+++

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Hosny Soliman 03 October 2011

Well done, how your words are very expressive as a great caring mother.Also all your advices are with a very elegant way.Your words are so simple so easy to find its way to your son's heart.With all my pleasure and honor accept me as one of your friends.

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Dr Antony Theodore 24 May 2020

Patience is the key to win Tolerance will take you far from sin Always keep the spirits up Success would surely round you up! teaching virtues and finding joy in it...... you are spiritual. tony

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Chinedu Dike 09 February 2018

An insightful rendition set aside for sober reflection. A well texted and nicely thought out piece graced with beautiful rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 July 2016

Life is not a funny game Every moment is challenge to tame Wisely choose the future road Expand your horizon much more broad..... a marvelous advice to your son and to all young ones.......take future in your hands and rely on God............. God bless you for this advice. tony

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Khairul Ahsan 17 July 2013

Always keep the spirits up Success would surely round you up! Very appropriate advice of a worthy mother to a worthy son.

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Shahzia Batool 03 July 2013

QUOTABLE LINES! ! ! Life is not a funny game Roads to reach the goals are hard Wisely choose the future road Expand your horizon much more broad Always keep the spirits up Success would surely round you up!

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