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Mohammad Akmal Nazir

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*A Humble Complaint*


You could have been more polite observing me,
Your harsh words have left
An indelible impression,
Hatred can be won by love alone,
As one gets relief from
Scorching heat
By gentle rain,
As the sermon of a saint soothes
The disturbed mind,
Your words could have healed
The wounds of my heart,
For once you touched me, felt me,
And covered your being with my love,
As you said,
You smelt my love and called it red rose,
What's happened now?
Thorns have grown on my lips,
My being has become the grave of your hatred,
Is it a diversion
Or you're posing to be more sensible?

Submitted: Saturday, November 27, 2010
Edited: Wednesday, July 06, 2011

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  • Rookie Dickens Joseph Sawo (1/8/2012 6:07:00 PM)

    this poem reminds me of a saying in my country where your title means the same, i love its simplicity in words.wonderful poem with wise sentences. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Scarlett Blades (10/10/2011 8:38:00 PM)

    Wow, very impressive! I love the way you describe things. Lovable! I rate it a perfect 10.: -) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Benjamin Dotse (10/7/2011 2:20:00 PM)

    Indeed this is a great poem.i dont even how to congratulate you
    this is a kind of situation which most lovers go through.your poem
    spoke to all of us who fall a victim to this situation.it not jyst a great poem but an excellent
    one.THUMBS UP (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points James Atil (9/19/2011 4:29:00 PM)

    Excellent! The emotion is there and I can see no reason to rate this 10.
    More power! Let's support each other in one way or another my friend...just visit my site www.poemhunter.com/jamesatil/ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 211 Points Almedia Knight-Oliver (8/8/2011 7:45:00 PM)

    A 'Humble Complaint' of a bitter-sweet love.Good write, Thanks for your comment about my poem. Keep writing about everday truths, but there're times when we can venture out into the universe (the light) and travel beneath the earth (darkness) both light and darkess give us both. Again, thanks for reading my poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ezediuno Louis Odinakaose (8/2/2011 6:40:00 AM)

    Thanks for reading my poem.
    I love yours, the title of one who is willing to give another chance.
    Your discriptive expressions shows flexible imagination and good use of words with smooth flow of language. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chris Haifley (7/24/2011 10:04:00 AM)

    Such an amazing poem: D the emotions woven throughout it are great. Its so thought provoking. You never think that someone who loved you so much could also cause so much hate. I'm blown away (: keep on writing! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 138 Points Spiritual Seeker (7/20/2011 4:04:00 AM)

    I keep repeating your poem, very humble, wise and deep indeed in feeling...congratulation..I rate it a great 10. Thnx for sharing. Kindly also read my poem'' Bring me to a far distant land''...TQ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Arijit Mn (7/14/2011 9:16:00 AM)

    Realy *touching*! Sir, your poem hold emotions. Loved it.
    Please read my poem 'As I Leave Home in the palanquin..'. (Report) Reply

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