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(Bahraich, U.P. India)

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*A Humble Complaint*

You could have been more polite observing me,
Your harsh words have left
An indelible impression,
Hatred can be won by love alone,
As one gets relief from
Scorching heat
By gentle rain,
As the sermon of a saint soothes
The disturbed mind,
Your words could have healed
The wounds of my heart,
For once you touched me, felt me,
And covered your being with my love,
As you said,
You smelt my love and called it red rose,
What's happened now?
Thorns have grown on my lips,
My being has become the grave of your hatred,
Is it a diversion
Or you're posing to be more sensible?

Submitted: Saturday, November 27, 2010
Edited: Wednesday, July 06, 2011


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  • Bothwell T Murindagomo (4/9/2014 2:31:00 AM)

    Wow, wow. Love the way u have played with simple words but bringing out exactly what the heart is feeling.

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  • Nyagaka Charles (1/7/2014 1:22:00 AM)

    real life...lovely piece.

  • Moses Olarotimi (2/29/2012 5:30:00 PM)

    Nice piece of creative intelligence. I envy u. Kip it coming

  • Diamond Williams (1/10/2012 11:19:00 PM)

    B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L...WELL WRITTEN

  • Eva Saldana (1/10/2012 7:22:00 PM)

    Exellent! ! :) i loved it. 10

  • Dickens Joseph Sawo (1/8/2012 6:07:00 PM)

    this poem reminds me of a saying in my country where your title means the same, i love its simplicity in words.wonderful poem with wise sentences.

  • Nadood Al Nasser (11/17/2011 1:49:00 PM)

    Beautiful and amazing. Well done my friend, u have just created a masterpiece! ! ! !

  • Mel Patterson (10/30/2011 5:29:00 PM)

    Hello and thank you for inviting me to read 'An Humble Complaint'....you write beautifully and so expressively. Wonderful write. I can feel the powerful words. Keep writing. God bless you.

    Mel

  • Marcus Mckinley (10/17/2011 12:18:00 PM)

    criticism is always hardest to take from someone you love.
    nicely written

  • Scarlett Blades (10/10/2011 8:38:00 PM)

    Wow, very impressive! I love the way you describe things. Lovable! I rate it a perfect 10.: -)

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