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Alf Hutchison (12/9/2009 1:53:00 PM)
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Deependra you sir write beautiful poetry and this one is no exception... it has meaning...flows well and good rythm...really enjoyed it..invite me anytime regards Alf
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Emma Adamyan (12/6/2009 3:38:00 AM)
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A true work of art. thx for the invitation my friend, ur 10
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Chitra - (12/5/2009 5:28:00 AM)
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the twists and turns, ups and downs...well protrayed through these wise verses! !
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Luwi Habte (12/5/2009 3:43:00 AM)
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yeah!
so very great poem
sufficient idea to explain
well done there
luwi
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Marieta Maglas (12/4/2009 12:26:00 PM)
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wonderful conceptual metaphor:
''Life is a mystery''
excellent philosophical poem, lovely to read
10++++++++++++
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Lynn Glover (12/4/2009 10:29:00 AM)
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Love, hope and faith all expressed expertly by a very well spoken poet. I really enjoyed the read, keep up the good work. Your Friend Lynn
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Seema Chowdhury (12/4/2009 6:00:00 AM)
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lovely poem. life is a journey with endless ups and downs.
well composed.
thanks fpr sharing.
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Patrick A. Martin (12/4/2009 3:14:00 AM)
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Nice piece I like you r journey that ends in hope.
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