A Journey Of A Thousand Miles Poem by Antonio Liao

A Journey Of A Thousand Miles

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a foot that lift high can be the first step that reach the
highest pick of the sky, as the eyes move in every
distance that may cause envy the sweet tasteless
journey of the past, who have come into the most
amazing fruit of today's compassion of knowing the
path in the season of spring

the menu of life experience, solidify in the harmony
of time, and the wall of the present entangle; the
cab wave of the past, you may not found the answer
in a melting snow, nor the falling rain to cleanse
your swollen face, the wounded flesh mark the
beginning of what life should be lived

as the truth, venture the birth of reason, one has to
open the call to face of what are clouds above each
knee, follow always the stream that flows and the
river that goes in the vast sea and ocean of what is
reality, for in every foot become a step towards the
gate of maturity the isle of every dream, hull the
journey of success

it is a thousand miles everyone wants to reach, stay
to refresh and humble for the path is slippery and full
of challenge to fulfill, making it lousy and smart make
your way to a beautiful morning at the end of each
journey, everybody will say thank you, this walk is for
me

let the feet step and the breathe easy and a thousand
steps journey for miles to see........

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 27 July 2009

WOW! ! ! A marvelous ending verse..well said, fine diction and well structured! ! !

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Lady Grace 29 July 2009

hope this journey is a very successful one...i wish and i pray that this single step will lead to thousand miles successfully obtain.. the presentation of your work is so nice, ..smart and detailed...great...

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 October 2009

it is a thousand miles everyone wants to reach, stay to refresh and humble for the path is slippery and full of challenge to fulfill, making it lousy.everybody wishes many miles to each and refresh....to fulfill the dream and goal....lovely poem andfull of great vision......10 read mine slippery path

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Dr.subhendu Kar 07 August 2009

cab wave of the past, you may not found the answer in a melting snow, nor the falling rain to cleanse your swollen face, the wounded flesh mark the beginning of what life should be lived............................yet a an ingenious write of impeccable grace, i am yet wordless by the beauty of narration,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Melvin Banggollay 05 August 2009

Wonderful piece of a journey of your mind.thanks for sharing. by the way, if I am not mistaken you are one of our speakers during our strategic marketing training at Batangas for DTI-CARP long time ago. thanks, melvin DTI-Kalinga

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 05 August 2009

An extremely well crafted poem. A journey with the unending pathway of time. Miles to go...........10/10. Naseer

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Ency Bearis 31 July 2009

a remarkable narrative poem...well described theme to the utmost point of poetic craftmanship...10

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