# # A Joy - Senryu [revised] Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# # A Joy - Senryu [revised]

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if it was a share
which gave you joy why then ploy
ploy shows greed and fear

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Smiley Hooker 19 July 2009

Well said, my friend...clever write! : -)

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Sandra Martyres 16 July 2009

You are right....Samanyan

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