david kush

Freshman - 568 Points (December 24 / south bend indiana)


Oh how powerful you can be
Strenghth beyond compare
Reaching deep inside one's soul
Pulling one out of the abyss so deep
Even the sun of midday can not penetrate
Warming a heart that has long gone cold
Reigniting one's passion to heights not thought possible
Oh one with few dimensions
You can turn the world into something,
Never before heard or seen
Be forever on my lips

Submitted: Wednesday, February 17, 2010
Edited: Tuesday, April 26, 2011

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Comments about this poem (A KIND WORD by david kush )

  • Rookie - 131 Points Ahmed Abomahfouz (3/24/2012 7:20:00 AM)

    you acheived the goal of your poem successfully in simple words brisk feelings and strong motivation (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 299 Points Adeline Foster (10/2/2011 12:59:00 PM)

    This reminded me of one of mine called: Kind Words
    It may surprise you.
    Adeline (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 138 Points Spiritual Seeker (6/25/2011 8:51:00 PM)

    nice words....nicely written....thnx for sharing...i rated this one 10. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Fae Sebastian (11/3/2010 7:41:00 PM)

    this is a lovely poem and is very well thought out. I really love the style you have! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lady Grace (2/18/2010 4:41:00 PM)

    this is nicely done..words reaching inside ones soul..so nice the flow of thought..it is strength beyond compare...smileeeeeeeeeeeeee (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 66 Points Prince Obed de la Cruz (2/17/2010 2:05:00 AM)

    you have to share this one.... persuade as many as you can! of course.... i rated this one 10..... it is very good! (Report) Reply

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