david kush

Freshman - 632 Points (December 24 / south bend indiana)

A Kind Word - Poem by david kush

Oh how powerful you can be
Strenghth beyond compare
Reaching deep inside one's soul
Pulling one out of the abyss so deep
Even the sun of midday can not penetrate
Warming a heart that has long gone cold
Reigniting one's passion to heights not thought possible
Oh one with few dimensions
You can turn the world into something,
Never before heard or seen
OH KIND WORD
Be forever on my lips


Comments about A Kind Word by david kush

  • Rookie - 140 Points Ahmed Abomahfouz (3/24/2012 7:20:00 AM)

    you acheived the goal of your poem successfully in simple words brisk feelings and strong motivation (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 299 Points Adeline Foster (10/2/2011 12:59:00 PM)

    This reminded me of one of mine called: Kind Words
    It may surprise you.
    Adeline (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 194 Points Spiritual Seeker (6/25/2011 8:51:00 PM)

    nice words....nicely written....thnx for sharing...i rated this one 10. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Fae Sebastian (11/3/2010 7:41:00 PM)

    this is a lovely poem and is very well thought out. I really love the style you have! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lady Grace (2/18/2010 4:41:00 PM)

    this is nicely done..words reaching inside ones soul..so nice the flow of thought..it is strength beyond compare...smileeeeeeeeeeeeee (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 108 Points Prince Obed de la Cruz (2/17/2010 2:05:00 AM)

    you have to share this one.... persuade as many as you can! of course.... i rated this one 10..... it is very good! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, February 17, 2010

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 26, 2011


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