A Kindled Soul Poem by ritty patnaik

A Kindled Soul

Rating: 5.0


weakness
imperfectness,
attitude
ungraceful,
shows in
restlessness
of the spirit.


a kindled soul
has patience
fortitude, balance
and pragmatism.
his true strength lies
in his quiet ways..

he can become
perfectly quiet
and perfectly
without fear!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Very true words Ritty. All the qualities you write about are so important to balance a person. I will remember your words, as I can be quite impatient at times. A Sagittarius trait I know. 10 love Karin

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Bob Blackwell 15 October 2009

A perfect example of a balanced and happy person. Bob

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Ejaz Khan 14 October 2009

A kindled soul stands nearer to the truth and therby cis blessed and content, enriched by knowledge and certainity. A great message with beautiful flow!

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Raj Nandy 14 October 2009

A POEM WITH A MESSAGE RITTY! 10! -RAJ

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Rakesh Bedi 12 October 2009

a glimpse of a kindled soul; i found it to be, ritty dear........defining a kindled soul should be, to me, equivalent to defying him, right? ? ?

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