A King And His Mantle Poem by SALINI NAIR

A King And His Mantle

Rating: 4.5


Castle is vibrant all the way
Slaves favor with all its deed
It's implied to the extreme sense
Majesty is universal anyway
The dictator of the fort is inside
Nine entrances shield his fort
All the way it's mystic to the witness
Streams that surge is red in color
It's the symptom of liveliness
Sparkle it with cosmetics
Costume it for all the charm
Though the dictator term his style
Harmony is still on his dispense
All endeavor for its existence
The palace is unique to its synchronization
None depart till king apart
Still they serve on his dictates
But the king is invisible
Like the oxygen of their way
But anonymous all the way
But on the way
He never say adieu to them
Lament and still at his depart
Merge the land with graciousness
Ambiguity that keep silence for the past
Anonymously with concord! ! ! !

©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved.

Friday, June 27, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: body
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
ITS ABOUT HUMAN BODY. KING IN THE SENSE THE SOUL..SLAVES ARE DIFFERENT PARTS OF THE BODY...........
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 19 October 2014

Very nicely depicted on soul and body in a philosophical way.......wonderful poetry

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In the Indian epics and yoga philosophy like texts the body with nine openings and inside the human body there exists the soul in two positions one active and another inactive but merely stands as a witness on the activities of the first one. There is a story purooravas the king and the queen deserted him after the completion of contractual period in world and the king in sadness makes enquiries about her escapes where there is also the palace and nine openings which is actually the human body and the soul. Here the poet have made a wonderful poetry about the human body and the sould and it is a creativity which entertains the knowledge thirsty minds of philosphical thoughts. Nice.

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Akhtar Jawad 27 June 2014

A nice description of human body having soul as the king that dictates all the parts of the body. A dictator or the king if just all work properly, otherwise not.

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