A Language Poem by Amitava Sur

A Language

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So hypnotic, mystic, and intoxicating you are
You are hot, a delirium, a thirst, creating lust
You woman are a language with dreams and hopes
You are the prime mover of life, originating LOVE.
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Amitava (21.10.2015)

A Language
Wednesday, October 21, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: woman
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roop Rekha Bhaskar 22 October 2015

She is all what you write and more. But when the verse is summoned up in LOVE, then no more to say. You have sketched woman and love as inseparable. This picture is beautiful.

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Amitava Sur 25 October 2015

Thank you Roop Rekha for realizing the finer tune in the poem

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Valsa George 21 October 2015

A great image of woman, but this image can vary from person to person! To some she may be an angel, but to some, a demon! Great write Amitava!

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Akhtar Jawad 21 October 2015

To say and describe the contents of a lengthy chapter in just only four lines is a marvelous art of Amitav Sur.

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Amitava Sur 25 October 2015

Thank you Akhtatar Vai - for your kind consideration in praising me

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Ratnakar Mandlik 21 October 2015

You are the prime mover of life, originating love. Very wonderful description. I liked it and enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing. Regards. Be always blessed. Ratnakar Mandlik

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Amitava Sur 25 October 2015

Thanks a lot for your valued comment on my poem.

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