A Lesson Of Life (Mata Hari) Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

A Lesson Of Life (Mata Hari)

Rating: 5.0


(dedicated to Ms. Anna Netrebko, a great soprano)

She wanted to live
Like a colorful butterfly
She was not content at home
She was not a good housewife

Tonight she'll dine with A
And tomorrow with B
She'll make a trip with C
She'll avoid serious liaisons

She never could dance well
They only came to see her
She was the first dancer
Who dared to show herself

Her success rose amazingly
With every veil she threw off
Her famous trademarks
Beaded bra, ornate headdress

Slender and supple
Like a sacred serpent
An elegant woman
Flirtatious dark eyes

Long black hair, bracelets dangling
Writhing to the beat of the music
Slowly removing the veils
That covered her body

Boundaries of art, sex, religion
Blurring them by her dance
To see her is an unforgettable
A paradise-like dream

Milan’s La Scala
Paris’ Folies Bergere
Giacomo Puccini also liked her
Better dancer than Isadora Duncan

Celebrated dancer
The infamous spy
Extraordinary life
The true seductress

Saga chapter
Captivated world
Thrilled audiences
Controversial performer

Taste for furs
Dramatic demise
Extravagant existence
Monte Carlo to Milan

Privately educated
Spoil by a father
A Dutch father
A Javanese mother

In Leeuwarden, Holland
Simple childhood
A decadent lifestyle
Between wealthy lovers

Bold
Exhilarating
Limelight
Illusions

Whenever, wherever she went
She attracted attention
But her life had been built
On half-truths and lies

Sensuous dancer
Femme fatale
Secret agent
Double life

With a stream of ambassadors, diplomats
She also socialized confidently with
Loving and leaving them
As she desired

She had passed information
To a beloved enemy officer
She had been so desperate for money
While she was in Madrid, Spain

Into cold winter breeze
In a grey suit, steps out
The dawn just breaks
In a morning fog

Towards a line of silent men
She is led across a muddy field
Refuses a blindfold
Choosing instead to look

Morning calm shattered by gunshots
She falls to her knees
Before slumping to the ground
She stares a few seconds at them

Motionless she lies
Towards the dark sky
Her face weakly turns
She's no more with us

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lynda Robson 04 December 2008

An epic poem about Mata Hari, very well written again, I enjoyed reading it, Lynda xx

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Carol Rhodes 06 December 2008

OH, BOY, MR. SHIDDIQI, THIS IS TRULY BREATHTAKING, HEARTBREAKING, HISTORICAL, AND SO DARNED WELL-WRITTEN AND TRULY SENSUAL! YOUR TALENT IS SHOWING TO THE MAX. YES, ANOTHER POIGNANT DOCUMENTARY WAITING TO BE MADE BY YOU. BY THE WAY, RE ISADORA DUNCAN, MY AUNT, LEONORA HUGHES, WAS A FAMOUS BALLROOM DANCER, TOO. HER DANCE TEAM NAME WAS, MAURICE AND HUGHES. THEY DANCED ROUND THE WORLD BEFORE KINGS/QUEENS/HEADS OF STATE. SHE WAS A MOVIE ACTRESS, ALSO. INTERESTING ERA. THIS POEM, BACK TO BUSINESS, IS A KEEPER, TO BE SURE. THANK YOU VERY MUCH. CAROL

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Anjali Sinha 14 December 2008

nice work long poem though -10 anjali (read mine too)

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Rajaram Ramachandran 15 December 2008

A spy's story is retold in verse form simply and nicely

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Aldo Kraas 15 December 2008

This poem is not bad at all

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Ruerd Visser 01 September 2009

What a wonderfull tribute to this famous woman. I like it as a friesian to hear about Margaretha zelle best known as Mata hari troughtout the word. She had the best of both worlds combined. Reminds me of another half javanese poet here in Sneek and his brother both artists at heart. Tjeerd lighthart is a real joy and a tribute to both friesland and indonesia. Unable to live of the art of poetry he ran a indonesian restaurant was a teacher and a waiter biding the time he was left without inspiriation. He told me he would not write for months and suddenly hed write for days. Fortunately he got published. Still i miss his cooking as i thouroughly enjoyed their food. May angels greet you Boomwhisperer Ruerd

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Ruerd Visser 01 September 2009

What a wonderfull tribute to this famous woman. I like it as a friesian to hear about Margaretha zelle best known as Mata hari troughtout the word. She had the best of both worlds combined. Reminds me of another half javanese poet here in Sneek and his brother both artists at heart. Tjeerd lighthart is a real joy and a tribute to both friesland and indonesia. Unable to live of the art of poetry he ran a indonesian restaurant was a teacher and a waiter biding the time he was left without inspiriation. He told me he would not write for months and suddenly hed write for days. Fortunately he got published. Still i miss his cooking as i thouroughly enjoyed their food. May angels greet you Boomwhisperer Ruerd

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Gargi Saha 22 January 2009

A wonderful poem....................u get 10++..............

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Juan Carlos Abeti 16 December 2008

a bit long for me, but a great job.....

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C.R. Clark 15 December 2008

Very nicely written. This one is rather long but it had no trouble holding my attention all the way through. You tell a good story indeed, my friend. Thanks Richard

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

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Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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