Unwritten Soul


A Letter In The Wind - Poem by Unwritten Soul

Yellow foliage fallen on my hands
Remind me, they once were green
Reminisce me to our beautiful time
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Comments about A Letter In The Wind by Unwritten Soul

  • Gold Star - 9,835 Points Heather Wilkins (8/11/2013 8:41:00 PM)

    this is a beautiful write. the last stanza a delight to write. enjoyed the write (Report) Reply

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  • Bronze Star - 2,956 Points Ken E Hall (7/3/2013 12:27:00 AM)

    Luvli poem indeed 'from me till end of my time, luvli all the way thru will read many times...excuse the luvli spelling its Yorkshire slang! which is said with deep meaning. regards (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Frank James Davis (4/5/2013 12:01:00 PM)

    You have a unique, extremely pleasing style.
    Wonderful, Soul! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 98 Points Vivek Tiwari (1/8/2013 10:48:00 AM)

    A rare but excellent piece. Goodly expressed. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Colin Bradley (1/1/2013 12:14:00 AM)

    beautifully written excellent (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 82 Points Jahan Zeb (12/14/2012 7:34:00 AM)

    Looking the same sun, hope it warming you
    Staring the moon bright, hope it shelters your night.

    This is undoubtedly a spectacular write and I enjoyed it very very much. I liked the thought in every part of this artistic piece. The best thing I saw and read in this piece is the wonderful imagination in it. the idea of getting sunlight from the sun looking at the moon for it is sheltering your friend.

    But you know I got relief to see that you do have a friend. Marvelous. Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,368 Points Tony Karas (12/11/2012 7:36:00 AM)

    Awesomely beautiful! A sure fire 10 if it would only let me enter ratings. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Teasia Ruffin (11/30/2012 2:12:00 PM)

    This poem is absolutely beautiful! ! ! ^^ i could read your poems all day (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 162 Points Vipins Puthooran (11/30/2012 3:42:00 AM)

    [a feeling of melancholy, shows intense and absolute love of companionship]
    Great poem my soul.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Www. Poemhunter.com/m-d-dinesh-nair-2 (11/29/2012 4:19:00 AM)

    A remarkable letter that speaks a lot dear WRITTEN SOUL. Poetry of this kind becomes a rare contribution and the elaboration upon the feelings conveyed has added to the own strength of this pleasantly long poem. A good work sir. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 67 Points Star Crossed Lady (11/28/2012 10:27:00 AM)

    I very much enjoyed reading this poem and reliving the wonderful memories I thought buried forever. Thank you. And i look forward to the book. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mehraneh Hosseini (11/26/2012 11:07:00 AM)

    Oh my friend, I always try to find my best line in a poem, but honestly I could not find any here.ALL of them are my best.I read it deeply more than once.You always write impressive but this one is awesome and it even makes the situation harder for you, because the next one should be more than awesome: p
    One of my country poets Fereydoon Moshiri wrote a poem Bi to Mahtab(in Persian) Or Without you moonlight I suggest you to read this poem(Its one of the best poems, that I have ever read!) , I don't know its translation is as well as the persian one but it is worth.
    Hope to read more & more of you: p: p: p (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sun Shine (11/26/2012 6:28:00 AM)

    Missing element is there, which is expressed in words!
    peak of emotions.
    Through the words one can feel the situation.every line has its own beauty.
    lovely poem! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 23 Points Ketan Hukare (11/25/2012 5:40:00 AM)

    An exceptionally well written and composed poem.
    Awesome.....................
    ....................Please share more (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kelly Seale (11/24/2012 10:01:00 AM)

    Beautifully written. Each words chosen reaches out, beyond time and space, beyond distance, beyond geography... and pulls him home, into your awaiting arms... Outstanding Ink Soul...; -)
    -Kelly. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie So Close (11/24/2012 1:22:00 AM)

    its pretty fantastic....! ! the lines
    Far by the oceans, across the lands
    Two minds bound to different poles of heart i do enjoyed a lot! lets hope a great future to your friend and also god will bind you together later....
    good work.

    »so close« (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,251 Points Xelam Kan (11/22/2012 8:40:00 AM)

    poignant
    artistically structured all the passions of lost love
    if read this poem few years back certainly it would make me cry
    the written soul wrote her soul (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,742 Points Wahab Abdul (11/21/2012 3:32:00 AM)

    great poem indeed....i love it......cheers (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Saeed Jan (11/18/2012 1:22:00 PM)

    Aha Soul, flying high..... Really a superb write... Emotionally charged... Every word is full of hope mixed with sorrow... Seasons change n V wait for some incomplete promises... Though giving us a new world to live in but still makes us stranger to our sounding... I wish ur friend come back to U!
    S-Jan (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 745 Points Shahzia Batool (11/12/2012 10:26:00 AM)

    Be strong whatever you do
    I am not be there but the wind will
    Carrying a letter for you
    from me till end of my time
    The poem offered a good read, and the poet's notes enhanced its beauty...a heart-felt dedication... (Report) Reply










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