Unwritten Soul


A Letter In The Wind - Poem by Unwritten Soul

Yellow foliage fallen on my hands
Remind me, they once were green
Reminisce me of our beautiful time
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Topic(s) of this poem: relationship, seasons


Comments about A Letter In The Wind by Unwritten Soul

  • (8/17/2016 2:55:00 PM)


    A letter... in the wind. A twinkle, in the globe... the globe of tear! A praying honest heart. Beauty of true relationship is all this poem. (Report) Reply

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  • (6/5/2016 12:24:00 PM)


    Artful use if words and phrase... Very descriptive. Please post the artwork you did about it. (Report) Reply

  • (5/9/2016 9:14:00 AM)


    Yes, another very moving poem with an unerring sense of rhythm. It contains many beautiful thoughts expressed with great artistry. Glad I found you!
    Tom Billsborough
    Ps No you found me first! A big bonus for me.
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  • Heather Wilkins (8/11/2013 8:41:00 PM)


    this is a beautiful write. the last stanza a delight to write. enjoyed the write (Report) Reply

  • (7/3/2013 12:27:00 AM)


    Luvli poem indeed 'from me till end of my time, luvli all the way thru will read many times...excuse the luvli spelling its Yorkshire slang! which is said with deep meaning. regards (Report) Reply

  • (4/5/2013 12:01:00 PM)


    You have a unique, extremely pleasing style.
    Wonderful, Soul!
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  • Vivek Tiwari (1/8/2013 10:48:00 AM)


    A rare but excellent piece. Goodly expressed. (Report) Reply

  • Colin Bradley (1/1/2013 12:14:00 AM)


    beautifully written excellent (Report) Reply

  • Jahan Zeb (12/14/2012 7:34:00 AM)


    Looking the same sun, hope it warming you
    Staring the moon bright, hope it shelters your night.

    This is undoubtedly a spectacular write and I enjoyed it very very much. I liked the thought in every part of this artistic piece. The best thing I saw and read in this piece is the wonderful imagination in it. the idea of getting sunlight from the sun looking at the moon for it is sheltering your friend.

    But you know I got relief to see that you do have a friend. Marvelous. Unwritten Soul
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  • (12/11/2012 7:36:00 AM)


    Awesomely beautiful! A sure fire 10 if it would only let me enter ratings. (Report) Reply

  • (11/30/2012 2:12:00 PM)


    This poem is absolutely beautiful! ! ! ^^ i could read your poems all day (Report) Reply

  • Vipins Puthooran (11/30/2012 3:42:00 AM)


    [a feeling of melancholy, shows intense and absolute love of companionship]
    Great poem my soul....
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  • (11/29/2012 4:19:00 AM)


    A remarkable letter that speaks a lot dear WRITTEN SOUL. Poetry of this kind becomes a rare contribution and the elaboration upon the feelings conveyed has added to the own strength of this pleasantly long poem. A good work sir. (Report) Reply

  • Star Crossed Lady (11/28/2012 10:27:00 AM)


    I very much enjoyed reading this poem and reliving the wonderful memories I thought buried forever. Thank you. And i look forward to the book. (Report) Reply

  • (11/26/2012 11:07:00 AM)


    Oh my friend, I always try to find my best line in a poem, but honestly I could not find any here.ALL of them are my best.I read it deeply more than once.You always write impressive but this one is awesome and it even makes the situation harder for you, because the next one should be more than awesome: p
    One of my country poets Fereydoon Moshiri wrote a poem Bi to Mahtab(in Persian) Or Without you moonlight I suggest you to read this poem(Its one of the best poems, that I have ever read!) , I don't know its translation is as well as the persian one but it is worth.
    Hope to read more & more of you: p: p: p
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  • Sun Shine (11/26/2012 6:28:00 AM)


    Missing element is there, which is expressed in words!
    peak of emotions.
    Through the words one can feel the situation.every line has its own beauty.
    lovely poem! !
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  • Ketan Hukare (11/25/2012 5:40:00 AM)


    An exceptionally well written and composed poem.
    Awesome.....................
    ....................Please share more
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  • Kelly Seale (11/24/2012 10:01:00 AM)


    Beautifully written. Each words chosen reaches out, beyond time and space, beyond distance, beyond geography... and pulls him home, into your awaiting arms... Outstanding Ink Soul...; -)
    -Kelly.
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  • So Close (11/24/2012 1:22:00 AM)


    its pretty fantastic....! ! the lines
    Far by the oceans, across the lands
    Two minds bound to different poles of heart i do enjoyed a lot! lets hope a great future to your friend and also god will bind you together later....
    good work.

    »so close«
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  • Xelam Kan™ (11/22/2012 8:40:00 AM)


    poignant
    artistically structured all the passions of lost love
    if read this poem few years back certainly it would make me cry
    the written soul wrote her soul
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